One thing that INSEAD MBA Managing Director shared in a recent interview with me was that he discourages any editing of essays that destroys the original voice of the applicants.
In his words, "with thousands of essays reviewed every year, the MBA Admission Committee can tell to the point as to which top consultant has edited the essay."
Wow! I thought.
I didn't contest his point of view as when we edit, that is the exact idea I convey to our clients - "Our editing will maintain your original voice"
Bland Narrative
But there is a genuine challenge that I see with essays written by technologists, bankers, and consultants. The phrasing is too..how you say it - bland. The uniqueness of their personality is never captured. But the moment I talk to the person on the phone, the personality always shines through.
On a few occasions, when I felt that the applicant is sticking to some pre-conceived notion of writing an essay and creating a cookie-cutter narrative, I encouraged them to record the answer with the uuh..ahh..and all the inconsistencies of a casual conversation.
Talk
The imperfections don't matter. Just talk, answer the question, and record it. Transcribe your answer. Read what you have said. I can guarantee you that you will find at least 30-40% unique phrases that are unlikely to be found on any sample essays.
Three Steps to Find your Unique Voice - MBA Application Essays
If you were contemplating writing the MBA Application Essay for this year, I would highly recommend that you practice one of the ideas:
1) Record your answers first before writing the draft version of the essay
2) Start a podcast about a topic that interests you (industry, hobbies, economy, or values/philosophy that guide you every day).
Create 1 podcast (5-minute length) a day for 30 days. It doesn't matter whether you publish it, but the anticipation of creating something for the public will improve the quality of your recording. If you don't want the unwarranted attention, just record it without publishing.
3) Write a 250-word (half page) observation about life, economy, or future, every day, for 30 days
Within a month of writing every day or recording a podcast, you will find a unique voice.
It is unlikely that an Editor like me would ask you to rephrase the essay. The MBA Admission team desperately seeks unique phrases in a pool of clichéd narratives.
To help you create a memorable MBA Application Essay, I have written Winning MBA Essay Guide. Download it here.
About the Author
Atul Jose is the Founding Editor of F1GMAT. He is the author of the best-selling book: Winning MBA Essay Guide – a how-to guide on using elements of storytelling to create a unique MBA Application Essay.
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