Why Stanford MBA Essay: 5 Dialogue Openers That Fail


Profile: Miss NL
Profile (Background): Miss NL, a PE investor, found her calling to enter a general management role while observing an inefficiency in delivery coffee to a customer in a Coffee Chain. Before working in PE, she was also part of the finance team that brought Apple Card to the market.
Profile: Miss. C
Profile (Background): Miss C, with strength in deal origination and portfolio company management in Europe in the healthcare and IT industries wants to build her network in the US and Asia and facilitate deals in the Energy industry
Essay Approach: “Why Booth MBA?”
• Business-Minded Essay: Please reflect on how your choices have influenced your career path and aspirations. (up to 300 words)
Background Information: An applicant who has grown in her PE career is facing a dilemma: whether to continue in her finance career or pivot into her creative career, where she has over 50,000 loyal YouTube subscribers, and her videos have captured over 10 million views.
Theme: Passion, Talent
Background Information: A PE associate narrates the challenge of onboarding an older candidate to the team. The person had an illustrious career in Technology but was a newbie to the NFT fund the team was managing.
Even with the history of recruiting non-traditional candidates from different backgrounds – the age (45+) bias, skepticism against a region known for its conservative values, and a warped view of the socio-economic exposure the candidate had, all culminate into resistance from the team in fully embracing the candidate’s ideas.
Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve. (up to 300 words)
Post-MBA Goal (Short-term): Senior Associate (Leadership responsibilities)
Build strategic decision-making, communication, and marketing skills to improve the service offering of the PE firm
Post-MBA Goal (Long-term): Scale the PE firm
Knowledge Gap: Leadership to transform the culture and build new allies in North America
Career Pathways: Leadership, Strategy, Private Equity