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MBA Application Essay Editing

Outline MBA Application Essays - By Events, Paragraphs & Story Arcs

Not everybody needs an outline to write the essay. If you have a blog or your professional work requires regular written communication, writing might have become second nature to you, but even the seasoned professional need a crutch to navigate essays where the subject is not a client or a news release or a newsletter, but themselves. 

Use outline if you have:

Why Atul Jose started writing F1GMAT’s Essay Guides

Atul Jose (Admissions Consultant, F1GMAT): I will start with the motivation behind writing F1GMAT's Essay Guides. When I started consulting and offering editing services – officially – way back in 2012, there was no one offering any sample essays – free or otherwise. Even blogging like how we are seeing now was not prevalent in the MBA admissions market. The first version of Winning MBA Essay Guide or any school-specific Essay Guides had no samples in it. But after reading the 100th book about writing, I noticed that apart from a couple of books, no one showed the work.

Connecting with MBA Admissions Team - 3 Strategies

I remember reading an essay for review where the applicant was passionately talking about a cause that was controversial. At the end of the 2nd paragraph, the applicant went on to criticize a Businessperson -  a public figure who happened to have close associations with the Business School. It clearly showed a lack of awareness.

MBA Essay Opening Line - 3 Strategies

Most MBA applicants use the opening line as a shock element. They start with something tragic, violent, anxiety-inducing, or scenery that gives the reader perspective that they are living a much more comfortable life compared to what the applicant went through. This approach works if your story truly has something unique – war, trauma, coming back from a life-threatening illness, or a challenge related to your identity.

Shortlisting Duke Fuqua 25 Random Things – 3 Strategies

The Duke Fuqua MBA application has three required essays. One is about the goal. The second is about the 25 random things, and the third is about how you will contribute to the Fuqua Community. Applicants, however, strategize the 25 random things as an opportunity to showcase personality traits that they couldn't highlight with Essay 3 - the three ways you will contribute to the Fuqua Community.

Duality in your Story

In early 2008 when the seeds of Entrepreneurship were sowing into my mind, I used to hang out with Entrepreneurs a lot – technologists who want to revolutionize the consumer market, small business owners who had scaled, and any relative who extended the brand to multiple geographies. One such legend was a gentleman in his mid-60s, who had his humble beginnings in an obscure village in South India but went on to create a recognizable Consumer Goods brand. I would assist his meetings and initiate conversations with potential customers.

How to connect host city experience with Post-MBA goals?

Cities define the experience of an MBA class. Columbia, NYU Stern and Cornell, all hosted in New York, want to hear how you would take advantage of the location. Even London Business School fearing the repercussion of Brexit have focused internally on London. HEC Paris taunts the vicinity to the world’s fashion capital as a defining characteristic. The only school that avoids mentioning the host city as a plague are economies that are not doing particularly well but have excellent Business Schools (IESE and IE in Spain).

MBA Application: 5 Strategies to position your extra-curricular experience

Most applicants don’t have continuous involvement with one non-profit. When they learn that the spike in activity, 1 year before admissions would be judged as manipulation by the US schools, the geographic spread of their target schools widens. European schools don't have such heavy emphasis on volunteering and extra-curricular.

MBA Admissions: How to make a comeback in R2

Round 1 can be brutal. Most of you who applied to Harvard and Stanford were rejected. Recuperating from the injury to your self-esteem, many take a break. The week-long break becomes a period of sulking and self-defeating thoughts. Many call me in the first week of November when most results are published and ask ‘what should I do.’

What was the error in my strategy?

Avoid these 5 Cliched storytelling Narratives in MBA Essays

You can’t write interesting narratives without reflecting and connecting two events. This essential skill can lead to misguided attribution and flawed causal relationship. The success of a project – timeline, exceeding quality guidelines and helping the company acquire a new asset or improving their stock value or reputation, depends on multiple factors.

In a hurry to quantify IMPACT, MBA applicants either overestimate their contribution or doesn’t cover the direct correlation of their contribution to the company’s quarterly/annual results. Both stem from Attribution Error.

Writing Freely Exercise #2 - Replace Blank Stare with Questions

A safe rule of thumb is 15 minutes.

If you are staring at a screen or a notebook without adding even a single line for over 15 minutes, it is time to frame the next line with questions.

Why 15 minutes?

I have seen MBA applicants, play with the rough draft on sentences that they should not, but the sheer perseverance sparked a free flow of sentences that became the foundation of their story. Don't underestimate the power of starring at a blank screen. But you have to set a deadline for each writing session.

Post-MBA Goals: Match Secondary and Base Skills

How you customize the curriculum and what you believe is the only thing that matters when you are solving a complex problem. Don’t use your long-term goals just as a narrative for essays. Work on it. Attract the right people to your network. Start offering pro-bono consulting if you have not yet already for non-profits. And you never know what you would solve – maybe Energy Crisis, Access to Education, Global Warming or Disease control.

5 Routines for writing free flowing MBA Essays

You are multitasking through projects, worrying about choosing the wrong school, keeping a low profile on your MBA plan, managing the politics in your team, coordinating with recommenders, preparing for the GMAT, collecting your transcripts, developing a plan to address your profile weakness, arranging funds and writing and rewriting essays.