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Wharton Future Professional Goals Essay: Strong Management Fundamentals

Wharton MBA Application Essay 1: How do you plan to use the Wharton MBA program to help you achieve your future professional goals? You might consider your past experience, short and long-term goals, and resources available at Wharton. (500 words)

For the fifth Sample essay, we look at a Fictitious profile – a candidate with 4+ years of experience with a Consulting giant.

When the consulting giant pivoted to leveraging analytics for all its solutions, the applicant recognized that it was not the knowledge of data science and analytics that offered consultants a strong command over client problems. A deeper understanding of Operations, Marketing, and Finance influenced a consultant’s ability to customize the data models.

When the client leveraged the data model without completely understanding the risks that the applicant was citing, the Buy-Out failed to maximize the return for the shareholders.

The failure, although was a result of the client’s appetite for risk-taking, as a consultant, the applicant felt that her lack of command over the fundamentals in Quantitative Finance and connecting the pillars of a business, i.e., Marketing, Operations, and Finance was also a contributing factor.

With Wharton’s General Management focus and a strong legacy in Finance, the applicant believes that a 2-year rigorous program like the MBA will improve her skills as a consultant.
Sample Wharton MBA Essay 1: How Wharton help achieve Future Professional Goals? (498 Words)
Growing up in a segregated black neighborhood with four siblings and a single parent, I learned to solve problems early on. To support my mother, I found new revenue streams through my tutoring and coached my siblings in Math, Science, and English. Teaching became a life-long passion with Teach for America (TFA), where I served as a corps member.

The learning and leadership skills I acquired at TFA were critical in qualifying for the education consulting projects at BCG. I was handpicked to solve the educational crisis in..

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Essay 1: Two short-form questions

What is your immediate post-MBA professional goal? (50 words)
What are your career goals for the first three to five years after completing your MBA, and how will those build towards your long-term professional goals? (150 words)

Essay 2: Long-form essay: Taking into consideration your background – personal, professional, and/or academic – how do you plan to add meaningful value to the Wharton community? (350 words)

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