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MBA Application Essay Tip 2 - Achievements

Before writing your essays, have a look at your life with an unbiased perspective.

We are our biggest cheerleaders, so all the events that have happened in our life would appear more heroic to us than to the admission committee. So do the following exercise:

 
1) List your 10 achievements from grade 1 to grade 12
2) List your 10 achievements in college ( and Post graduate course if applicable)
3) List your 10 achievements in workplace (job experience)

Just list it (no details required) . You can also include achievements that are related to not for profit organizations. Like - I raised 50k for the Old Age Home in my neighborhood, which was a record for that year. I know that 10 achievements are a big pain for most of the average Joes. Take your time.

This is the most important step in the whole MBA application process.

Now that you have listed the achievements, strike off the ones that are irrelevant to a Business School admission committee, like I was part of the soccer team in grade 2 (To show my competitiveness at a very young age). This argument might sound good but on second thoughts, without a strong argument to support this achievement, listing these kinds of achievements is a waste of time. Participation is good but focus more on leadership roles and in roles where you have actively contributed.

Give high priority to 3 and 2. Most of the time, people learn from their jobs and then from their course work.

Job does not necessarily mean working for a company on a payroll; it can be volunteer work or internship for a start-up or starting your own business.

About the Author 

Atul Jose

I am Atul Jose, Founding Consultant of F1GMAT, an MBA admissions consultancy that has worked with applicants since 2009.

 

For the past 15 years I have edited the application files of admits to the M7 programs: Harvard Business School, Stanford Graduate School of Business, the Wharton School, MIT Sloan, Chicago Booth, Kellogg School of Management, and Columbia Business School, together with admits to Berkeley Haas, Yale School of Management, NYU Stern, Michigan Ross, Duke Fuqua, Darden, Tuck, IMD, London Business School, INSEAD, SDA Bocconi, IESE Business School, HEC Paris, McCombs, and Tepper, plus other programs inside the global top 30.

 

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