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Haas MBA Application Breakdown and Deadlines (2023 Entering Class)

Haas School of Business had an impressive 7% hike in post-MBA total salary outshining the likes of Harvard, Tuck, Columbia, and MIT Sloan. Regarded as one of the most balanced classes in representing candidates from diverse pre-MBA education and the only school that has made its four defining principles a guiding force, Haas MBA is a favorite for top applicants.

In this application breakdown of the Haas MBA program, we cover: 

Deadlines

Haas MBA Application is accepted in three rounds – September, January, and April.

Rounds Deadline Decision
Round 1 Sep 22 , 2022 Dec 15, 2022
Round 2 Jan 5, 2023 Mar 23, 2023
Round 3 Apr 6, 2023 May 11, 2023

Personal Data

The personal data includes the standard information - Name, Email, Telephone, mailing address, Date of Birth but also includes multiple options in Gender( Gender at Birth, Gender Identity, Sexual Orientation), Language Proficiency (Option to Choose multiple Languages), Number of Languages applicant speak proficiently (max 10), along with details of Residency (Country, City, and California residency status while applying), Citizenship, Ethnic or Racial Identity, and Emergency Contact.

Personal Data II

The section starts with whether the applicant had attended a community college in California. There is a not applicable option, too, if you don’t reside in California. The question is a hint that the school values profiles that have gone through a limiting educational environment, assuming that most community colleges don’t offer a similar quality of education as a private school. If you are leveraging a hardship narrative, ensure that the corresponding data is captured in the application form.

GPA: Applicants are required to enter GPA based on the following grade to GPA mapping.
A+ = 4.0     B+ = 3.3     C+ = 2.3     D+ = 1.3
A = 4.0       B = 3.0       C = 2.0       D = 1.0
A- = 3.7     B- = 2.7     C- = 1.7     D- = 0.7

Enter 0 if your grades are not in a 4.0 scale GPA format.

Advanced 2-year GPA: There is also a space to enter a 2-year GPA.

Note: Although we couldn’t find any direct help on the application page to do the calculation, the public health department at Berkeley has a neat excel calculator.

Times Taken (GMAT/GRE): The next question is about the number of times GMAT/GRE has been taken.

Although the question is about GMAT/GRE, the test scores are not captured in the Personal Data II section.

Quantitative Readiness: The next question asks if the applicant is choosing text flexibility.   If you choose yes, the prompt guides to submitting proof of quantitative readiness through professional quant-heavy certifications. There is an additional essay such applicants must submit to validate the data.

Work Experience: The applicant is required to submit the months of full-time work experience from undergraduate degree to July of the year when the person is joining the program.

Post-MBA Industry and Function: The applicant must choose the desired post-MBA industry and function.

The post-MBA industry options are Accounting, Advertising/Public Relations, Aerospace, Agricultural Services, Automotive, Banking - Commercial/Retail, Banking – Investment, Biotechnology, Chemicals, Computer-Related Services, Construction, Consulting, Consumer Products, Education, Energy, Entertainment, Environmental Sciences, Finance, Financial Services, Government, Health Services, High Technology/Electronics, Hospitality, Import/Export/International Trade, Industrial Products, Insurance, Law, Medical Products/Devices, Military, Money Management, Not-For-Profit, Other Manufacturing, Other Services, Pharmaceuticals, Printing/Publishing, Real Estate, Recreation/Sports, Retail, Telecommunications, Transportation and Utilities.

The post-MBA function includes Accounting/Auditing, Commercial Lending, Consulting/Management Services, Engineering, General Management, Information Systems, Marketing/Sales, Medical Practitioner, Operations, Other, Personnel/Industrial Relations, Planning/Corporate Strategy, Project Management, Research/Development, and Venture Capital.

Post-MBA Goals: After entering the post-MBA industry and function, the applicant must enter their career goals in 150 words with the question:
Briefly describe your immediate post-MBA career goals (150 words maximum)

Diversity: One of our goals at Berkeley Haas is to develop leaders who value diversity and to create an inclusive environment in which people from different ethnicities, genders, lived experiences, and national origins feel welcomed and supported.

Q) Can you please describe any experience or exposure you have in the area of diversity, equity, and inclusion, whether through community organizations, personal, or in the workplace? (150 Words)

Although outside the traditional essays section, the question on diversity is important for applicants to demonstrate traits that match with Berkeley’s DNA of Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion. We have highlighted a few scenarios to answer the Haas Diversity question for essays and interviews

Sponsorship: The sub-section asks if the applicant would be financially sponsored by the employer with no further details asked if they select yes.

The sub-section specifically asks if the applicant would be funded by the Fulbright Foundation, IIE, Muskie Fellowship, or AmidEast.

The description is required if the applicant chooses yes.

Partners: The applicant must confirm if their partner is also applying for Haas. The name and the program they are applying for should be also be included if applicable.

Previous Applicants: The sub-section asks whether the applicant is enrolled as a Graduate Student at UC Berkeley. If the applicant has been enrolled – mention the term and the program.

The sub-section for the Haas Full-time MBA application specifically asks whether the applicant has applied for the MBA or MFE programs in the past 2 years and the acceptance status of the previous application.

Dual and Concurrent Degree:  For dual degree applicants, they must choose from MBA/JD, MBA/MPH Or MBA/Meng.

Academic Interests: Haas MBA offers 13 different pathways. If you have brainstormed the goals narrative with your MBA admissions consultant, it will be easier for you to choose the appropriate academic interests from Corporate Social Responsibility, Energy & Clean Technology, Entrepreneurship, Equity Fluent Leadership, Finance, Global Management, Health Management, Marketing, Real Estate, Social Sector Leadership, Sustainable & Impact Finance, Strategy & Consulting, and Technology.

Other Programs: Haas MBA Admissions team asks applicants to select all the programs that they are applying. This includes Carnegie-Mellon University (Tepper), Columbia University, Cornell University (Johnson), Dartmouth College (Tuck), Duke University (Fuqua), Emory University (Goizueta), Georgetown University (McDonough), Harvard University, IESE Business School, Insead, London Business School, Massachusetts Institute of Technology (Sloan), New York University (Stern), Northwestern University (Kellogg), Rice University (Jones), Stanford University, University of California - Los Angeles (Anderson), University of Chicago (Booth), University of Michigan - Ann Arbor (Ross), University of North Carolina - Chapel Hill (Kenan Flagler), University of Pennsylvania (Wharton), University of Southern California (Marshall), University of Texas - Austin (McCombs), University of Virginia (Darden), University of Washington (Foster), Washington University in St. Louis (Olin), Yale University and Other.

Total number of the institution (including Haas): 10+

The next question is about the number of institutions an applicant is targeting with the choice, including 10+ institutions.

Advice: Include peer schools from the list. An applicant need not disclose all the schools that they are targeting. Some schools are known to be sensitive if they know that the applicant is targeting peers and schools above the hierarchy. Although it is tough to gauge what the school intends to observe with the number of schools and the specifics of competing schools, any school selection above 5 is perceived to be from applicants with genuine weakness – academic, age, or otherwise.

Affiliations: Haas applicants are asked to share membership details or affiliation with select few organizations: Management Leadership for Tomorrow, Summer Institute for Emerging Managers and Leaders, and Forte MBA Launch for Women.

Influence: The applicant is also required to share the details of their interaction with a current student or alum who might have influenced the decision to apply.

Academic History

Institutions: Applicants can add multiple academic institutions with the "Add Institution" button and add the following details: Institution Name, Country, City, State, Dates Attended, and Level of Study. The applicant should upload the transcripts - in a single or multi-page pdf or JPEG, or TIFF format. There are no size restrictions.

Test Scores

GMAT/GRE: Applicants are offered the option to choose from GMAC EA, GMAT, GRE, IELTS, and TOEFL, which on selection must also include the test date and registration number.

The GMAC EA is only for the EW/EMBA program.

GMAT/GRE Flexibility: Haas is among a few select schools that allow applicants to submit GMAT/GRE scores after the application deadline, provided the applicant submits an improved score (if available) two weeks before the notification deadline.

TOEFL/IELTS: If the applicant is from a country where the official language is not English, TOEFL/IELTS scores are mandatory, even if the school's medium of communication is English.

Non-Quant Courses: Do not upload transcripts of non-quant courses or courses attended during high school that might include seminars, certification in computer technology, or any professional/leadership development courses.

GPA: International students must either convert GPA to a 4.0 format or use a recognized Credential Evaluation Service (https://www.naces.org/members)
Transcript Format: The transcript cannot be a scanned copy of a printout. It should be a copy of the original transcript that is received in a digital format.

Employment

Applicants must submit the following details for each Employer: Organization Name, Current Employer (yes/no), Telephone, Employer's Location, Country, City, State, Dates of Employment, Starting Title, Current/Ending Title, Starting/Ending Payroll Title, Starting/Ending Annual Base salary (in USD), Annual Bonus (in USD) along with Industry/Function details.

Reports/Leadership: Many applicants leverage their leadership experience in the essays. It is important that you clearly mention the Direct Reports, Indirect Reports, Annual Revenue, Number of Employees, and Company Description along with Company URL, Responsibilities / Accomplishments, and Reasons for Leaving (if applicable) in the sub-section so that the narrative about conflict or leadership could be validated.

Strategically quoting numbers is an essential part of creating a persuasive narrative. Read F1GMAT’s Haas MBA Essay Guide or Winning MBA Essay Guide (Includes Haas MBA Essay Tips and Samples) to learn how.

Resume

Although a 1-page format is preferred, Haas School of Business accepts a second page if the applicant has extensive research and business experiences like career switchers or Master’s candidates with more than 5 years of experience.

Recommendations

Haas provides the option to send the recommendation letter requests through email or by post. Choose the option before entering the following details (First Name, Last Name, Organization, Position/Title, Industry, Relationship, Telephone, and Email). While choosing the recommender's email id, mention their corporate id. Otherwise, the admissions team might subject the email to additional validation and review.

The applicant has the right to access the recommendation letter or waive off the right according to the Family Educational Rights and Privacy Act of 1974 (Buckley Amendment).

The recommendation letter form starts with a question of whether the supervisor is a Berkeley-Haas alum and requires that the person enter the program name and the year of graduation.

Recommendation letter Questions

The recommendation letter questions are similar to the Common Recommendation Letter Questions, with the only difference in the additional context offered for the constructive feedback question.

Q) Please provide a brief description of your interaction with the applicant and, if applicable, the applicant's role in your organization.

Q) How does the applicant's performance compare to that of other well-qualified individuals in similar roles? Please provide specific examples. (E.g. what are the applicant's principal strengths?)

Q) Describe the most important piece of constructive feedback you have given the applicant. Please detail the circumstances and the applicant’s response.
In the Berkeley MBA program, we develop leaders who embody our distinctive culture's four key principles, one of which is “confidence without attitude” or “confidence with humility.” Please comment on how the applicant reflects this Berkeley Haas value.

(Optional) Is there anything else we should know?

Traits: The supervisor is required to appraise the applicant on Result Orientation, Strategic Orientation, Team Leadership, Influence and Collaboration, Communication, Information Seeking, Developing Others, Change Leadership, Respect for Others, and Trustworthiness.

The evaluation is not without any baseline. The admissions team clearly asks the supervisor to compare the applicant with others who have applied to Business Schools and those who are groomed for leadership positions.

The supervisor must rate each trait on the following description:

Results Orientation

5 - Invents and delivers best in class standards and performance
4 - Introduces incremental improvements to enhance business performance using robust analysis
3 - Exceeds goals and raises effectiveness of organization
2 - Overcomes obstacles to achieve goals
1 - Fulfills assigned tasks
No Basis

Strategic Orientation
5 - Implements a successful strategy that challenges other parts of the company or other players in the industry
4 - Develops insights or recommendations that have shaped team or department strategy
3 - Develops insights or recommendations that have improved business performance
2 - Identifies opportunities for improvement within area of responsibility
1 - Understands immediate issues of work or analysis
No Basis

Team Leadership
5 - Recruits others into duties or roles based on insight into individual abilities; rewards those who exceed expectations
4 - Actively engages the team to develop plans and resolve issues through collaboration; shows how work fits in with what others are doing
3 - Solicits ideas and perspectives from the team; holds members accountable
2 - Assigns tasks to team members
1 - Avoids leadership responsibilities; does not provide direction to team
No Basis

Influence and Collaboration
5 - Builds enduring partnerships within and outside of organization to improve effectiveness, even at short-term personal cost
4 - Brings others together across boundaries to achieve results and share best practices
3 - Generates support from others for ideas and initiatives

2 - Engages others in problem solving

1 - Accepts input from others

No Basis

Communication
5 - Presents views clearly; solicits opinions and concerns; discusses them openly
4 - Presents views clearly and demonstrates understanding of the response of others
3 - Presents views clearly and in a well-structured manner
2 - Is generally to the point and organized
1 - Sometimes rambles or is occasionally unfocused

Information Seeking
5 - Involves others who would not normally be involved including experts or outside organizations; may get them to seek out information
4 - Does research by making a systematic effort over a limited period of time to obtain needed data or feedback
3 - Asks a series of probing questions to get at the root of a situation or problem
2 - Personally investigates problems by going directly to sources of information
1 - Asks direct questions about problem at hand to those individuals immediately available
No Basis

Developing Others
5 - Inspires and motivates others to develop by providing feedback and identifying new growth opportunities as well as supporting their efforts to change
4 - Gives specific positive and negative behavioral feedback and provides unfailing support
3 - Gives specific positive and negative behavioral feedback to support the development of others
2 - Points out mistakes to support the development of others
1 - Focuses primarily on own abilities
No Basis

Change Leadership
5 - Builds coalition of supporters and coordinates change across multiple individuals; may create champions who will mobilize others to change
4 - Promotes change and mobilizes individuals to change behavior
3 - Defines positive direction for change and persuades others to support it
2 - Challenges status quo and identifies what needs to change
1 - Accepts status quo; does not see the need for change
No Basis

Respect for Others
5 - Uses understanding of others and self to resolve conflicts and foster mutual respect
4 - Is respectful to all and generous with praise; ensures other opinions are heard
3 - Is humble and respectful to all
2-  Generally treats others with respect; usually shares praise and credit
1 - Is sometimes self-absorbed or overly self -interested
No Basis

Trustworthiness
5 - Is reliable and authentic even at some personal cost; works to ensure all members of the organization operate with integrity
4 - Is reliable and authentic even at some personal cost; acts as a role model for the values of the organization
3 - Acts consistently with stated intentions even in difficult circumstances
2 - Generally acts consistently with stated intentions
1 - Shows occasional lapses in trustworthy behavior
No Basis

The supervisor must also demonstrate enthusiasm for the applicant with the question: To what degree do you recommend this applicant be admitted to the Berkeley Full-time MBA Program? (Enthusiastically Recommend/Recommend/Recommend with Reservations/Do Not Recommend)

The admissions team prefers that the supervisor copy-paste the letter in the space provided. Alternatively, they can upload the letter as one document.
The supervisor must also declare that the applicant was not involved in the crafting of the letter. For such circumstances, leverage our recommendation letter editing service. We will ensure that the integrity of the process is not compromised while ensuring that your interests and concerns are conveyed strategically to the supervisor.

Essays

There are two required essays for Haas MBA Applicants with an additional academic readiness essay for those who have chosen to waive off GMAT/GRE test. Along with the essay, the applicant must also upload proof of excellence in quant (certificates and other accolades).

Required Essay #1: What makes you feel alive when you are doing it, and why?
(A successful essay will share a specific and personal experience that helps the reader get to know you better, giving insight into your character, values, or how you would uniquely contribute to the Berkeley-Haas community) (300 words maximum)

Required Essay #2: The definition of successful leadership has evolved over the last decade and will continue to change. What do you need to develop to become a successful leader? (300 words maximum)

Academic Readiness: Please briefly describe the ways in which you have demonstrated strong quantitative abilities or plan to strengthen your quantitative abilities (300 words maximum)

The applicant must also explain why the current supervisor is not writing the letter of recommendation.

Q) Supplemental Information: If you have not provided a letter of recommendation from your current supervisor, please explain. If not applicable, enter N/A.

Community/Professional Organizations/Extracurricular: Applicants must furnish details of up to 5 organizations - community/professional or extracurricular where they have dedicated a significant amount of their free time. Each entry should include the name of the organization, nature of the organization, size of the organization, dates of involvement, offices held, and an average number of hours spent per month for each engagement. The listing should be in the order of importance (more time invested should be listed first)

Part-Time and Full-Time Jobs (Undergraduate or Graduate Studies)

Haas is also among the few schools that value the origin of the applicant's work ethic. Part-time and Full-time jobs during undergraduate or graduate degree are required to be entered in this sub-section with details that include: Name of the employer, job title, employment dates, location, and the number of hours worked per week for each position

Academic Discipline: The school also requires that the applicant enter details of academic discipline, suspension, probation in college or university with the circumstances in the space provided.

Optional Information: Although the optional space is reserved for those who had challenging circumstances growing up, some of the implicit challenges (parents/guardians' education and its influence on low family income) could be strategically highlighted in the essay if the information about parents or guardians is shared honestly.

The optional question are:

1) What is the highest level of education completed by your parent(s) or guardian(s)?

2) What is the most recent occupation of your parent(s) or guardian(s)?

The third questions clearly grade the difficulty of growing up without fully-engaged parents

3) If you were raised in one of the following household types, please indicate:

• Raised by a single parent
• Raised by an extended family member (grandparent, aunt/uncle, niece/nephew, cousin)
• Raised in a multi-generational home
• Raised in foster care

4) If English was not the primary language spoken in your childhood home, please indicate

The fifth question offers additional context on the challenges of meeting academic and career goals or elevates the goals achieved that might look typical among peers.

5) If you have you ever been responsible for providing significant and continuing financial or supervisory support for someone else, please indicate (Child, Spouse, Sibling, Parent, Extended family member (grandparent, aunt/uncle, niece/nephew, cousin/Other)

We recommend that applicants with significant familial challenges (foster care/single parent or low-income household) answer the optional question about unusual life circumstances.

Please elaborate on any of your above responses. Alternatively, you may use this opportunity to expand on other hardships or unusual life circumstances that may help us understand the context of your opportunities, achievements, and impact. (300 words maximum)

Additional Optional Information: This is a typical optional question about employment gaps, academic weaknesses and measures how applicants address their weaknesses. As always, don't give excuses. Ideally, answer them if you have taken any corrective measures or you couldn't address inherent circumstantial weaknesses with the previous question.

Scholarships

Berkeley Haas has listed three scholarships on the MBA Application page - Brian Maxwell Fellowship, Reaching Out MBA (ROMBA), and The Forté Foundation fellowships.

Brian Maxwell Fellowship: For this fellowship, the applicant should have an entrepreneurial mindset with a bias toward creating and implementing innovative projects. There are three questions as part of the fellowship:

1) How would you benefit from receiving this fellowship? (300 words)
2) If you could have had a conversation with Brian, What would you have discussed? (300 words)
3) What makes you an entrepreneur? What and/or who has inspired you to pursue this path? (300 words)

For the rest of the two fellowships (Reaching Out MBA (ROMBA) and The Forté Foundation), applicants should just show interest based on profile fit.

Criteria

Forté Foundation Fellowship: Commitment to advancing women’s representation in business.
Reaching Out MBA Fellowship: Awarded to students with a history of empowering LGBT+ in Business.

Importance of Resume/CV: The 1-page/2-page resume is used by the admissions committee for the scholarship/fellowship application as well. Make sure that the achievements are the right mix of metrics, action verbs, and IMPACT statements. We use this approach in our resume editing service. You can sign up here.

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  • Harvard MBA Essay Guide (20 Sample Essays)

    Growth-Oriented Essay: Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth. (up to 250 words) 

    Example #1: Persistence Narrative 
    Background Information: The applicant – a design and music talent, shares her journey through several setbacks. She attributes curiosity to her growth.  
    Curiosity: Philosophy  
    Curiosity (Explained): Curiosity as a philosophy is tough to translate into a narrative unless you are from the creative industry or your contributions had an influence on a solution or an initiative.  
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to capture the humanity of the applicant and her influence in music instead of just highlighting how she overcame multiple roadblocks to gain attention as a designer.  
    Theme: Persistence  
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Life Starts at NO (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example) 

    Example #2: International Community Building 
    Background Information: The applicant, a Machine Learning (ML) entrepreneur specializing in healthcare diagnostics, shares how his curiosity to learn other ML algorithms’ evolution in diagnosing Alzheimer’s, cancer, and heart disease transformed his platform into a global community. 
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to show the applicant’s contributions in diagnostic from 2020 to 2024 by citing two events. Such examples build credibility instead of engagements that were recent. The evolution of the platform from an AI development community to a community for discussing the application of AI in diagnostics is captured through a ‘curiosity’ angle.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Growth through Collaboration (AI in Healthcare) (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #3: Culture
    Background Information: The applicant, an Entrepreneur from India narrates his first entrepreneurial experience – facilitating exchange of stamps in the late 1990s.
    Theme: Culture
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Instead of addressing the biases in the investor community that could turn preachy, I wanted to focus on the applicant and his entrepreneurial journey by citing two entrepreneurial experiences – a platform(club) for stamp collection and his Grocery delivery App.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – The American Dream (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #4: Addiction
    Background Information: The applicant – a beneficiary of the foster home system, captures the sacrifice his adopted grandparents made to save him from a path of addiction. Paying it back through early intervention among teenagers and community engagement is the curiosity narrative.
    Theme: Addiction
    MBA Essay Strategy:  My strategy is to capture a gratitude narrative in the first one-third of the essay to demonstrate motivation for starting the venture and dedicate the latter part of the essay to the unique solution
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Drug Addiction and Gaming (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #5: Scarcity
    Background Information: The applicant, an education major, recognizes that 70% of all students in Kenya don’t have a computer. The curiosity that drives him to pivot from one solution to another is the growth narrative.
    Theme: Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Often, innovation is captured with a ‘hero’ narrative where the applicant is the sole originator of an idea. I wanted to break that cliché and include a person from whom the applicant learned to use a concept called ‘scaffolding.’
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Scarcity (Growth-Oriented HBS Essay Example)

    Example #6: FinTech
    Background Information: The applicant captures a vulnerable moment of a beneficiary to compare his journey of side hustle before a technology giant noticed his talent. Although cryptocurrency is not a flavor for the year, capture niches where innovation is still happening. 
    Theme: Education, Child Welfare
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Empathizing with a techno solution is tough without a strong backstory around the beneficiary. For the essay, I wanted to clearly establish the beneficiary – Rami, before the applicant narrates the similarities to his journey and finally shares the solution that emerged from his curiosity.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – FinTech as a Tool for Good (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #7: Learning from the best
    Background Information: The applicant – a Remote Engineer in the Oil and Gas industry, reflects on a value that has helped her learn from the best regardless of her geographical limitations.
    Theme: Learning
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The effectiveness of the case-study method depends on the assumption that peers in a Harvard MBA class will help elevate your learning experience. For the essay, I have highlighted the applicant’s recognition of this value proposition with three examples.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Learning from the Best (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #8: Military & Search for IMPACT
    Background Information: The most common narrative for US military applicants is to quote 9/11 and the reaction your immediate family had while watching the events unfold. The horrifying moment is captured as a motivation to join the Military. On digging deeper, most applicants would share that their motivations were diverse.
    Theme: Career Choice
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I wanted to quickly highlight that the applicant had the choice of entering any industry. One achievement to demonstrate his curiosity that I shared in the first half is the invention of a game. Since the game is mentioned in the resume and verifiable through search, I didn’t quote the name. By clearly highlighting the person’s curiosity and career options, the family legacy is used as a factor in joining the military.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Career Choice after a Military Career (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)
     
    Leadership-Focused Essay: What experiences have shaped who you are, how you invest in others, and what kind of leader you want to become? (up to 250 words)

    Example #9: Small Business Values
    Background Information: The applicant - a second-generation Asian American, is familiar with the values of fiscal conservatism, building relationships, and understanding the daily struggles of the community through his family’s department store.
    Theme: Customer-Centric
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The applicant’s role in developing an App for the store is highlighted in the essay at a crucial part of the narrative so that the essay is not all about his father. I have also humanized the journey – by sharing how upset the father was when the revenues fell by 40%. The essay is about the transformation in the applicant’s value from a person chasing productivity and optimization technique to someone who is truly thinking about the customers. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Small Business Values (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #10: Breaking Away from Family Business
    Background Information: A unique challenge that applicants whose parents are public figures or CXOs of businesses or entrepreneurs are the pressure to live up to the parent’s standards or milestones. For the leadership narrative, the burden of legacy is established before the narrative addresses his leadership principles.
    Theme: Authenticity  
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, I want to capture an entrepreneur’s journey to rise above his entrepreneur father’s image. But I didn’t want to make the entire essay about this complex dynamics. The narrative is around the applicant’s focus on customers and surrounding with teams who keeps him grounded. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Breaking Away from Family Business(Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #11: Creativity and Communication 
    Background Information: When the overall percentage of users with internet access is 62% in South Africa and the inequality accentuated by the rural and urban divide, the applicant endured the lack of digital infrastructure, and spending close to 22% of the family income on gaining relevant information on schools, global exams, and financial assistance. 
    Theme: Creativity, Communication
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The strategy is to share why the applicant values no distraction in a child’s home for optimum education experience. Then I highlight the many roadblocks the applicant’s non-profit faced in receiving fee waiver for their cooperative run ISP.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Non-Profit (Telecom) (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #12: Mental Health
    Background Information: The applicant like most didn’t pay much attention to the mental health epidemic until tragedy hit home.
    Theme: Communication, Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  A question we frequently get from applicants is whether they should cite tragedy in the family as a motivation for a venture or a non-profit initiative. As long as you don’t linger too much on the tragedy and offer a balanced narrative, there are no restrictions on leveraging unique stories from your life. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Mental Health (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #13: Trauma, Healing & Finding Authentic Self
    Background Information: The applicant narrates the absurdity of war in the narrative about the duties in Kabul, and the trauma. Instead of wallowing in on the horror, the applicant takes what makes military applicants strong and guides unprivileged children build life and leadership skills.
    Theme: Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing PTSD in an essay, the healing process, and the cues that helped the applicant are too sacred to be shared in a Harvard MBA application essay. However, with the right motivation and narrative arcs, you can capture the essence of your journey without sharing the darkest secrets. That is what I did by merging two stories – the horrors of the war with a non-profit engagement.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Military & PTSD (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #14: Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra
    Background Information: In this narrative, the applicant captures Peru’s Silver mining boom of 2006. The growth experienced in her father’s business shifted the family’s economic status to a new stratosphere. Through the changing economic and family dynamics, the applicant finds her voice in a unique way, initially to record her unheard voice but later as one of the youngest subject matter experts in mining and commodities.  
    Theme: Failure
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, the strategy is to show how life’s unpredictability is a blessing. By narrating two setback events, the essay demonstrates the applicant’s resilience and her acknowledgment of people who made a comeback possible.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #15: War, Immigration and Starting Over Again
    Background Information: Despite a raging war in Syria, the family of the applicant was unblemished by the chaos. The strategic government assets near the applicant’s house would have made the region an easy target, but it was not. The calmness of her journey is shattered in one event. From the privileges of a cocooned life, the applicant is forced to think about survival, her sister’s future, and her future in the US. The second half of the narrative captures the change that was forced on her. 
    Theme: Gratitude, Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I consciously chose not to start the essay with a dialogue or trauma. Two lines are allocated to set up the narrative before the trauma event.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – War, Immigration and Starting Over Again (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay: Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve. (up to 300 words)

    Example #16: Creative or Finance
    Background Information: The applicant starts the narrative with the origin of her talents. The unbridled enthusiasm receives a reality check when in high school, the applicant’s father has a conversation with her about academics. While the applicant picked up her quant skills, she was reaching over 50,000 loyal fans, and her videos captured 1 million views. 
    Theme: Passion, Talent
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing vulnerability is the toughest part for Harvard MBA applicants. For this essay example, I have captured the applicant’s uncertainty about career choice throughout the essay. Here the goal is to show vulnerability in the career choice essay while for leadership and growth essay, I could capture one example each from creative and PE industry respectively to balance the narrative. So don’t follow this example without a strategy.  
    Read: Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay – Creative or Finance (Business-Minded HBS MBA Essay Example)

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