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Sample LBS MBA Essay: Post-MBA Goals (Technology to FinTech Consulting)

In the first example, we look at the career profile of a Technologist who had worked closely with Investment Banks (IB) while implementing a FinTech solution.

The narrative starts with the background, then quickly contrasts the regulatory mechanism between banks and platforms. Then, the candidate shares his concerns on how Robo-advisors have taken over retail banking, and it is only a matter of time before automation would start putting pressure on the high commission that IB charges. By citing the $15 Goldman Sach investment in Kensho, generic observation is translated to a specific data point.

The opener of the second half of the essay is an honest acceptance that without an MBA, a technologist like the candidate would not be taken seriously. Without dwelling too much into the reality of how expertise is evaluated, the candidate quotes the curriculum structure of the LBS MBA program. A statistic highlighting London's FinTech dominance over the American counterparts, especially Silicon Valley is quoted as the transition to the next paragraph.

The final paragraph states how serving in the non-profit sector is essential to developing a thorough understanding of the social, technological, ethical, strategic and management issues of a complex problem.

Sample LBS MBA Essay: Post-MBA Goals - How Prior Experience & LBS MBA will contribute (486 Words)

Students have to take a minimum of 10 total courses from a mix of specializations, and a maximum of 12 courses that also include language courses (minimum one and up to two) from French, Spanish, Mandarin, Arabic, Portuguese, German, and Russian.

Q1. What are your post-MBA goals and how will your prior experience and the London Business School programme contribute towards these? (500 words)

As a technologist, I had the good fortune to work with Investment Banks that have realized lately that the sell-side leverage is slowly eroding with technological integration. The study on feasibility for the Technology projects broadened my understanding of investment banking, blockchains, and AI algorithms for stock picking. It was during a recent project with < company name> that I was assigned the task of implementing a Financial Technology (FinTech) solution. During the tenure, I was amused by the regulatory roadblocks banks face in bringing products to the market. On the other hand, start-ups in FinTech are disrupting the market funding platforms and services.

The old-fashioned broker-based systems will soon be redundant if the adoption of Robo-advisors in retail banks is any indication. Although a large part of the premium that Investment Banks charges customers is based on the research expertise of the consultants, Goldman Sach’s $15 million investment into

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Question 1 (500 words): What are your post-MBA goals and how will your prior experience and the London Business School program contribute towards these?

Question 2. (200 words): What makes you unique?

Question 3 (500 words): (This question is optional) Is there any other information you believe the Admissions Committee should know about you and your application to London Business School?

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