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Sample INSEAD MBA Essay: Candid Description (Consulting to Product Development) (492 Words)

Give a candid description of yourself (who are you as a person), stressing the personal characteristics you feel to be your strengths and weaknesses and the main factors which have influenced your personal development, giving examples when necessary (approximately 500 words). *

In the second example on INSEAD MBA Strengths and Weaknesses essay, we take you through the journey of a creative, who from a young age found rearranging the spatial design a passion. The opening paragraph captures the incident as a 4-year old to demonstrate the origins of her interest. What seemed a weakness in language skills turned out to be a highly evolved skill in recognizing patterns and visualizing designs in empty spaces.

The applicant then transitions to a project where the CEO of the bank shares an impending talent management problem. The more than 30% attrition rate is attributed to the poorly designed workspace. By interviewing and listening to the employees, the applicant finds the biggest assumption that the management had about the nature of the workforce.
 

Working on design solutions, although satisfying, could also lead to moments of self-doubt, which the applicant cites as a weakness. The pressure to outdo the previous solution added to the stress. By developing a process-centric approach with clear separation of human and organizational problems, the applicant manages the behavior. Another weakness that the applicant mentions is a lack of vocabulary in translating design ideas for a quant audience. By writing a crime novel in 30 days, the applicant developed the skills to verbalize details.

The concluding paragraph summarizes the applicant's motivation to switch from design to consulting that also led her from Singapore to Australia – an experience that helped her acquire a culture of intense work with fun. The last line affirms her optimism in leveraging the INSEAD and her design experiences to transition from consulting to product development.

Sample Essay 2: Candid Description, Strengths & Weaknesses (Consulting to Product Development) (492 Words)

When the kindergarten teacher shared the below optimum language test scores in the parent-teacher meeting, my mother listed the puzzles meant for 7 years old that I solved in minutes. The teacher couldn’t understand her point. From a 4-year old’s fascination with activities that require reimagining the spatial format, I became a designer obsessed with finding harmony among human interactions, whitespace, and utility.

In 2015, the CEO of <X> looked worried and shared about the 32% attrition rate in his team. Despite performance-based bonuses and flexibility in working hours, the migration continued. I interviewed the employees and found that..
 
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F1GMAT's INSEAD MBA Essay Guide

Question 1: Provide a summary of your career since graduating from university, explaining the rationale behind your key decisions and career progression. Include a description of your current (or most recent) role, covering the scope of your work, major responsibilities, employees under your supervision, budget size, clients/products, and any notable results achieved. (500 words)

Question 2: Describe your short and long-term career aspirations, including your target geography, industry, and function. How do you plan to bridge the gap between your current position and these goals, and how will INSEAD help you achieve them? (300 words)

Question 3: Give a candid description of yourself as a person and a leader, emphasising the strengths and weaknesses you recognise in yourself. Explain how you are actively working on your development, sharing key experiences that have shaped you, providing specific examples where relevant. (500 words)

Question 4: Describe a highly stressful situation you faced and how you managed it. What did this experience teach you about yourself and your interactions with others? (400 words)

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