Concept Testing
CWhat I had not expected was the chain of consequences that followed
1st Example - Opener as a Line
When my CFO asked me to defer the audit, I refused. The next three weeks tested whether I would hold the line under sustained pressure. What I had not expected was the chain of consequences that followed
2nd Example - Opener as a Paragraph
When my CFO asked me to defer the audit, I refused. He responded by putting additional responsibilities so that I fail in my audit. I didn't. He responded by reporting a weakness in my audit as a failure to comply with industry standards.
Corrected Essay
When my CFO asked me to defer the audit, I refused. He responded by putting additional responsibilities so that I fail in my audit. I didn't. He responded by reporting a weakness in my audit as a failure to comply with industry standards.
