How to use the Essay Pillaring Technique to influence the MBA Admission team

Instead of linearly writing one sentence that connects one thought to the next, this technique purposefully leaves gaps in comprehension between one sentence, the next, and maybe even the next, but catches up at the fourth sentence to connect with sentence one. If you leave too much gap between sentence 1 and 4, the Essay reviewer will lose interest.
The number of Round 2 applicants tends to be higher than Round 1 despite the admission team and consultants, including me, recommending applicants to target dream schools (first and second in the list) by round one. 



