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Haas MBA Defining Leadership Principles Video Essay Example (Commitment)

Traditional Leadership, where the goal is to establish authority and, through posturing, enforce compliance, works in a large organization with systems, structure, and a clearly defined chain of commands. Although the style works in an environment where the margin for error is high, and the company can absorb losses in the short-term, in a start-up, openness and aligning the team’s incentives with the company’s milestones are crucial for gaining traction. This could be in the form of a vesting period and other bonus structures. The hours are different, and so is the commitment. 

Problem: In this example, we narrate an example of a start-up that had incredible growth, positioning the applicant on a path to financial independence. A setback event is captured in the middle of the narrative. The leader’s vulnerability, adaptability, openness, and mission to leverage power for good are cited as qualities that motivate the applicant to support his vision and make short-term sacrifices. 

Berkeley Haas Leadership Principle: Beyond Yourself

Theme: Leadership

Theme (Explained): The narrative starts with a  role model – the CEO and Founder of the startup and transitions into why the applicant found the person inspiring. An example of emulating the founder’s style of leadership is the core of the narrative. 

Opener: I wanted to start with the high the startup experienced before revealing the setback.

Strategy: I have adopted the W-pattern writing style where the opener starts on a high note. Then we transition into the low, then to the applicant’s journey of emulating the founder’s open leadership style. 

2 Minutes: 254 words 

Profile: Product Manager

Industry: Healthcare

Beneficiary: Physically Impaired, Mentally Impaired

Traits: Resilience, Commitment, Motivating, Persistence    

Skills: Leadership

Speed: Medium to Fast

250 words: Medium
250 words – 300 words: Medium to Fast
300 words and above: Fast

Berkeley Haas Embody Four Defining Principles Video Essay Example (Beyond Yourself) (Adaptability and Leveraging Power for Good) (294 Words)

Q) The Berkeley MBA program develops leaders who embody our four Defining Leadership Principles. Briefly introduce yourself to the admissions committee, explain which Defining Leadership Principle resonates most with you, and tell us how you have exemplified the principle in your personal or professional life.

Please review the Defining Leadership Principles in advance and take time to prepare your answer before recording. You will be able to test your audio-visual connection before recording. Video essays should last 1-2 minutes and may not exceed 2 minutes.
 

In 2018, our company's valuation improved by 15x when an investor showed interest in acquiring us. From paper millionaires, we had a real shot at financial independence. 

When the deal fell apart, we recognized that ..

 

Download F1GMAT's Haas MBA Essay Guide for the Complete Video Essay Script, where the applicant shares how he committed to persisting when the startup experienced a serious financial setback. The commitment to the beneficiary and the solution his team developed answer why he made such a unique choice 

Berkeley Haas MBA Essay Guide

Question 1: What makes you feel alive when you are doing it, and why? (300 words maximum) (Video Essay)

Question 2: What are your short-term and long-term career goals, and how will an MBA from Haas help you achieve those goals? Short-term career goals should be achievable within 3-5 years post-MBA, whereas long-term goals may span a decade or more and encompass broader professional aspirations. (300 words max)

Question 3: Distance Traveled: At Berkeley Haas, we consider "distance traveled" as the contextual information that helps us understand the unique circumstances, challenges, or influences that have shaped your personal and professional journey.

We invite you to share aspects of your background, personal circumstances, or significant experiences that have meaningfully impacted who you are today and how you've reached this point. Please tell us how these experiences have influenced your perspectives, decisions, and aspirations, and how they contribute to the person you are becoming. (300 words max)

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