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Essay B: Why Stanford? (400 Words) - Writing Tips

Essay B: Why Stanford? (400 Words)

Since you have a complete overview of the curriculum, the study options, and the student clubs (Read F1GMAT’s Stanford MBA Essay Guide for in-depth analysis), it is time to answer Essay B, which asks specifically about ‘how your short-term goals will be fulfilled with a Stanford MBA.

Why Stanford MBA – Career Growth (Courses, Clubs, and Alumni)

When 33% of the graduating class of 2022 chose the Finance Industry post-MBA, there is a clear trend. There is nothing wrong with following it. Applicants who try to be ‘different’ and cite unconventional career paths – Govt. or creative do not often get through the admission process.

Underneath all the essays about motivation, you must understand that MBA Admissions is a well-oiled veto process for employment. Sure, the MBA program will give you the confidence and the skills, but if the quality of the entering class were to be compromised, the smooth transition from pre-MBA to post-MBA for Stanford candidates would be affected. The brand value of the program depends on Stanford's post-MBA salary and career options.

Schools reserve a small percentage of seats for the exception – the low GMAT scoring high performer, but almost all top schools have an average GMAT score of 730 and an average GPA of 3.4, but the most crucial aspect of the selection process is the evaluation of your work experience.

Over 350 recruiting companies hired Stanford GSB Full-time MBA students. The strong partnerships that GSB’s Career Management Center has developed over the years cannot be jeopardized if your application essay hints in any way that you are not the best employee in terms of communication, leadership, teamwork, and effectiveness.

When there is little to choose between two candidates, the professional accomplishments are insurance so that the candidate can repeat her performance post-MBA.

Clear Career Path -> Stagnation

Applicants have to state that they had a clear career path and growth over their 3-5 year career but reached career stagnation when they started pursuing cross-functional job openings - one of the most common reasons for pursuing an MBA.

Clear Career Path -> Future Value

For Consultants working for the Big Cs, the narrative must be slightly tuned. If your employer is sponsoring the course, you can quote courses that will help in gaining immediate value. Mix it up with experiences that are relevant to your vision/value that you have hinted at for the What Matters essay.

To show a clear learning path with Stanford MBA, select four courses - two from the core and two from electives. Then, demonstrate how you understand the curriculum and its value for your post-MBA role.

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F1GMAT's Stanford MBA Essay Guide

Essay A: What matters most to you, and why? (650 Words)

Essay B: Why Stanford? (350 Words)

Optional Question: Think about times you’ve created a positive impact, whether in professional, extracurricular, academic, or other settings. What was your impact? What made it significant to you or to others? (600 Words) (200 words – each example)

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