First Section: The applicant starts with an interesting experience of working with two contrasting experiences. One working for a CEO, who was bold and took on the competitors with zest, and the other who kept a low-profile but worked on the fundamentals and the strategic goals. The difference in outcome is cited as a motivation for leadership development.
Second Section: Stanford’s leadership courses, labs and the unique skills of recognizing intention is mentioned as vital for making deals.
Third Section: An example from the applicant’s career where he showed vulnerability and the mentorship he received is cited as a moment of clarity. The applicant cites a Stanford professor in PE for his unique background and the lessons he expects to receive from the practitioner.
Fourth Section: The fourth section is tied to Finance and the specific value the applicant would receive from the courses in the academic area.
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Sample Why Stanford MBA: Accounting to Private Equity (394 Words)
X declared bankruptcy and Y is on a path to lead the telecom market. Leadership made the difference.

