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Sample Columbia MBA Goals Essay: Healthcare (Finance to Consulting) (499 Words)

Post-MBA Goal (Short-term): Valuation Analyst to Consulting

Post-MBA Goal (Long-term): Start a boutique Consulting firm specializing in the Healthcare industry

Problem (Narrative): For this Sample MBA Essay, I had to focus on the healthcare niches in the Columbia MBA curriculum and connect with the applicant’s exposure and experiences. 

Knowledge Gap: Healthcare Strategy, Entrepreneurial leadership and Consulting 

Career Pathways: Healthcare, Entrepreneurship

Electives: I have shortlisted electives and collaborations according to the niche knowledge gap

•  Healthcare Investment and Entrepreneurship—HCIT & Services
•  Healthcare Industry Association (HCIA)
•  Columbia Healthcare Conference
•  The Foundation of Entrepreneurship Course (The Eugene Lang Entrepreneurship Center)

Opener: Starting the story with the restaurant business sets up the immigrant story to demonstrate the applicant’s work ethic and experience in a small business. 

Strategy: I have used the Family Business (Restaurant) in the first paragraph to highlight applicant’s exposure to entrepreneurship as the applicant plans to start a boutique consulting firm in the long-term.

Sample Columbia MBA Goals Essay: Healthcare (Finance to Consulting) (499 Words)

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Download F1GMAT's Columbia MBA Essay Guide for the Complete Essay, where the applicant captures storytelling from his family restaurant business to career choice in healthcare and connects it all to his motivation to switch from Finance to Consulting, by quoting Columbia MBA Curriculum and Career Pathways

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