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Berkeley Haas MBA What Makes you Feel Alive Essay (Working on Climate Change)

Haas MBA Essay: What makes you feel alive when you are doing it, and why? (300 words maximum)

Sometimes life’s mission might be something that has a ripple effect on an entire generation and the future of humanity. It could be working on a vision to bring equity into a society that is growingly becoming unequal. It could be working on systems, policies, and technology that would determine how humans will consume and expend resources for the next 1000 years.

Theme: Climate Change

Theme (Explained): As extreme weather event has become more frequent, a 1°C to 2°C above pre-industrial levels that is likely to occur with climate change would disrupt the food supply, potable water, housing, and immigration trends that will strain even the most well-funded cities. For this example, I have highlighted the plight of Fiji natives, who faces a greater threat than funded communities.

Profile: Consultant

Industry: Government

Similar Narrative (Industries): Non-Profit, Technology, FinTech, Consulting, Government

MBA Essay Strategy: The Strategy in this essay for me was to take the Haas admissions team directly into the problem coastal Fiji is facing. By taking the reader through three areas of the consulting engagement – stakeholder management, working with bureaucracy, and emotional intelligence to manage multiple motivations of stakeholders, I could present the applicant’s diverse skills while also demonstrating his passion for working on an inter-generational problem. 

Opener: I wanted the reader to understand the sacrifice the applicant made in pursuing a career in consulting for the government while showing humbleness with a line on privilege.

Background Information (Resume): Worked with over 35 agencies – both international and national, while collaborating with passionate engineers, policymakers, scientists, politicians, and volunteering teams. 
 

Sample Haas MBA What Makes you feel Alive Essay (Future-Proofing the Underprivileged) (Climate Change) (300 Words)

Relocating from the US to Fiji with comfortable housing in the island’s capital felt like a privilege compared to the hundreds of thousands of villagers, who have seen their beloved land gulped by the ocean’s rage. 

We established rapport with neighboring clans..

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Berkeley Haas MBA Essay Guide

Question 1: What makes you feel alive when you are doing it, and why? (300 words maximum) (Video Essay)

Question 2: What are your short-term and long-term career goals, and how will an MBA from Haas help you achieve those goals? Short-term career goals should be achievable within 3-5 years post-MBA, whereas long-term goals may span a decade or more and encompass broader professional aspirations. (300 words max)

Question 3: Distance Traveled: At Berkeley Haas, we consider "distance traveled" as the contextual information that helps us understand the unique circumstances, challenges, or influences that have shaped your personal and professional journey.

We invite you to share aspects of your background, personal circumstances, or significant experiences that have meaningfully impacted who you are today and how you've reached this point. Please tell us how these experiences have influenced your perspectives, decisions, and aspirations, and how they contribute to the person you are becoming. (300 words max)

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I am Atul Jose, Founding Consultant of F1GMAT, an MBA admissions consultancy that has worked with applicants since 2009.

 

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