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Avoid these 3 Weakness Narratives in MBA Application Essays

Atul Jose (Admissions Consultant, F1GMAT): Today I will talk about three common weakness narratives that can jeopardize your admission chances.

1) Hard work

Applicants want to share that their strength is also sometimes a weakness. They change the phrasing of the essay in such a way that instead of hard work, they use the word commitment or perfectionist – all to convey that they overwork or overwork the team, they have high standards, and it can be a problem in terms of expectations that are set or the deadlines planned or even the conflicts that arise from mismanaged expectations. There is a lot of scope for the narrative but don’t use the word ‘hard work’  or perfectionist as a weakness. Instead, use ‘lack of delegation’ or ‘lack of prioritization’ as
a weakness. This weakness is a genuine one for those who are in the 3-5 years of experience range.

2) Communication

Communication has so many contexts. If your weakness example requires a big narrative, don’t use the word communication. Schools expect applicants to have excellent communication skills within the team, across the hierarchy in the organization, and with the clients. So avoid using ‘communication’ as a weakness.

3) Leadership

Schools have redesigned their curriculum to accommodate leadership courses – many even in the core itself. So leadership development is now an integral part of an MBA experience, mostly through global experiential learning, courses, and taking on leadership roles in student clubs. But schools expect you to have some leadership experience even before joining the program. Again there are so many contexts in leadership that are tough to convey without a big narrative. Avoid labeling your weakness with the term ‘leadership.’

If you want to know how to write an authentic narrative about your weaknesses, strengths, and post-MBA goals, Download F1GMATs Winning MBA Essay Guide

 

About the Author 

Atul Jose - Founding Consultant F1GMAT

I am Atul Jose - the Founding Consultant at F1GMAT.

Over the past 15 years, I have helped MBA applicants gain admissions to Harvard, Stanford, Wharton, MIT, Chicago Booth, Kellogg, Columbia, Haas, Yale, NYU Stern, Ross, Duke Fuqua, Darden, Tuck, IMD, London Business School, INSEAD, IE, IESE, HEC Paris, McCombs, Tepper, and schools in the top 30 global MBA ranking. 

I offer end-to-end Admissions Consulting and editing services – Career Planning, Application Essay Editing & Review, Recommendation Letter Editing, Interview Prep, assistance in finding funds and Scholarship Essay & Cover letter editing. See my Full Bio.

Contact me for support in school selection, career planning, essay strategy, narrative advice, essay editing, interview preparation, scholarship essay editing and guiding supervisors with recommendation letter guideline documents

I am also the Author of the Winning MBA Essay Guide, covering 16+ top MBA programs with 240+ Sample Essays that I have updated every year since 2013 (11+ years. Phew!!)

I am an Admissions consultant who writes and edits Essays every year. And it is not easy to write good essays. 

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