The year was 2007. I was working for a start-up in Bangalore. On its 11th year of existence, the company moved from a crummy apartment to a new building in an upscale locality. The 80+ employee, many of whom I saw for the first time, had gathered for the big occasion. After the opening prayers, we had a chance to meet the old guards and network with them.
From the small gathering, I saw a man, pudgy, short and in his late 50s, walk towards me. He asked, "Haven't seen you. New Recruit?". I gave an elaborate introduction and shared how my travel responsibilities limit meeting up with my team in the office".
"Hi, I am Rakesh. I don't visit the office that often. That is why we have never been introduced."
I smiled and didn't have much to add. "Maybe an ex-employee," I thought.
A friend of mine, nudged and shared "You know who that is? It's Rakesh Sharma - the first Indian to go to Space." He expected me to fangirl out, and I did, although I didn't scream at him.
I was starstruck, to say the least, and found new excuses to hang around him, and absorb everything he was saying. He is among the 549 people from a population of 7.4 billion to have reached space, and among the first from 1.2 billion Indians to do so.
Now everything he said was Gold. My analytical mind was taking a hike. My emotional mind has taken over. The validity of the information didn't matter.
Most opening lines that we get in our Essay Review Service fall into the four categories:
1) What you always knew/loved
2) Take the narrative to a year
3) Start from a third person's experience or
4) Start with a philosophy or value
"I was always fascinated by consulting."
"The year was 2013."
"My Father had just bought his new.."
"Life is not what you get but what you give."
Many applicants procrastinate till they get the perfect opening.
Forget the opening, start writing.
You have to understand one blind spot most reviewers have. They become a fan of the applicant when it is 'truly' unique. I am not talking about Academic achievements - GMAT 750+ or GPA 3.8, but achievements that had the most impact on humanity or community (no matter how small it is) or your country.
When I suggest creating an IMPACT list in our consulting and review services, clients feel intimidated.
What you have achieved in your project had far further implications. You just have to sit, reflect and brainstorm.
What is your 1 in a Billion Space Moment?
Maybe it is a 1 in a Million moment. It doesn't matter.
Let us find out.
For your Success,
"He invested so much time going through my company, my sector, and my undergraduate institute, finding every small thing that could be leveraged in the essays. Despite deadline looming, he insisted on making an impact list that had all the events related to my life and finding an innovative way to weigh them. Once we selected the achievement that was most impactful, he asked me every possible detail about the project, even asking me to make a small presentation that would explain my project in the simplest way possible. This process, though exhausting, was important, as along the way we were able to discover the business impact of an engineering project." - Accepted to the 2016 MIT Entering Class - Round 1 Deadline
Posted On: 30th August 2016
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Only 1 in 900 gains admission to Harvard MBA program. If you write your essay focused only on your achievements, post-MBA goals, and your pre-MBA experience, you will be among the 899 rejected applicants.
ATTENTION is the secret ingredient. How will you get the attention of the essay reviewer?
You know why parables shared 1000 years ago are still shared among us?
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Winning MBA Essay Guide Includes
+Harvard MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Sample MBA Essay – Gratitude & Giving Back (319 Words)
Sample MBA Essay – Entrepreneurship (Influence of Childhood) (401 Words)
Sample Harvard MBA Essay - Volunteering (Mental Health Awareness) (774 Words)
+ Stanford MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Sample Why Stanford MBA Essay (Consulting)(399 words)
Sample Why Stanford MBA Essay (Tech Entrepreneur) (390 words)
Sample Booth MBA Essay #2: Leadership experience (Teach for America)(640 Words)
Sample Columbia MBA Essay 2: New York for Marketing Professionals (244 Words)
Sample Columbia MBA Essay #3 - Team Failure (Marketing Lead) (242 Words)
Sample Columbia MBA Essay #3 - Team Failure (Technology) (248 Words)
Sample Columbia MBA Essay #3 - Team Failure (Pharma) (244 Words)
+ MIT Sloan MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Personality Type (Accepted MIT Sloan Students)
Cover Letter Checklist
Sample Essay 3: Extra-Curricular and How enriched you are
+ Haas MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
Sample MBA Essay: Non-Profit
Sample MBA Essay: Technology
Sample MBA Essay: Marketing
Sample MBA Essay: Getting Fired
Sample MBA Essay: Diverse and Inclusive Culture
Sample MBA Essay: Leadership
Sample MBA Essay: Post-MBA Goal & How Pre-MBA Experience will help
+ Yale SOM MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Sample Yale SOM MBA Essay: Business Development (Mobile Start-Up)(486 Words)
Sample Yale SOM MBA Essay: Investment Banking (IB)(404 Words)
Sample Yale SOM MBA Essay: Consulting (442 Words)
Sample Yale SOM MBA Essay: Technology (452 Words)
Sample Yale SOM MBA Essay: Marketing (492 Words)
Sample Yale SOM MBA Essay: Entrepreneurship (497 Words)
+ Ross MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Sample MBA Essay: Finance Professional who was a former member of a rock band (96 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Marketing Professional with a hidden talent to do Impression (100 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Life Philosophy through the prism of an Entrepreneurial failure (94 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Consulting for a Pharma Giant (Made a Difference) (91 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Three-Level Sanitation Campaign (100 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Water Conservation Kit (99 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Losing client (100 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Misreading Market Conditions (93 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Strategic Planning vs. Tactical Dominance in Chess (97 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Out of my comfort zone(extra-curricular) (93 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Out of my comfort zone (Daily Science Show) (99 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: Simplifying Operations for Manufacturing (extra-curricular) (90 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: I am aware that I am different (Leadership and Culture) (98 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: I am aware that I am different (Technology Project and Last-minute change) (98 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: I am aware that I am different (Making Business metrics relevant to a Creative team) (91 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: I find it Challenging when People (Timidity)(98 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: I find it Challenging when People (Laziness)(100 Words)
Sample MBA Essay: I find it Challenging when People (Pessimism) (96 Words)
Sample Essay – Short-term Goals and why the goal is the right choice for you (Technology to Marketing)(299 Words)
+ London Business School MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
London as the Financial Hub
London as the Technology Hub
London as the Consulting Hub
Sample LBS MBA Essay (A Career Switcher from Hospitality to Consulting) (499 Words)
Sample Short-term Goals Essay – Technology to Consulting (100 Words)
Sample Long-term Goals Essay – Consulting for Government (100 Words)
Sample Long-term Goals Essay – Plan B (89 Words)
Framework for Answering the Duke Fuqua 25 Random Things
Sample Duke Fuqua Essay: The Fuqua community and you (Max 2 Pages)
+ NYU Stern MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Sample NYU Stern Essay 1: Goals (498 Words) (Finance)
5 Examples with Images
7 Professional Gains
Sample Wharton MBA Essay 1: Gain professionally from the Wharton MBA? (473 words)
Sample Wharton MBA Essay #2: Math Tutoring and Experimental music’s value (388 Words)
+ The Art of Storytelling
+ Leadership Narratives
+ Review Tips
+ Persuasion Strategies
+ The Secret to "unleashing" your unique voice
+ How to write about your Strengths
+ How to write about your Weaknesses