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How to answer the Haas MBA DEI, Justice and Belonging Essay

At Haas School of Business, the DEI, Justice, and Belonging initiatives cover 12 broad range of identities:

1.    Race
2.    Ethnicity
3.    Gender
4.    Age
5.    Religion
6.    Language
7.    Abilities/Disabilities
8.    Sexual Orientation
9.    Gender Identity
10.    Political Diversity
11.    Socio Economic Status
12.    Geographic Region

But for the Essay, the school has prioritized four  identities –  ethnicity, genders, lived experiences, and national origins. 

Most of the four identities can be derived from the 12 identities, except for political diversity. 

History of DEI at Haas

From 2021, Haas School of Business has a DEI Strategic Plan Status and Tracker report. 

Started in 2019 with an Action Plan, Haas' approach to DEI is captured with three broad objectives. 

1) Increase Diversity & Representation 
2) Integrate DEI Skills
3) Cultivate Belonging

You can mimic a similar context for your DEI essay by shortlisting examples where one of the three objectives was met

1)  Increase Diversity & Representation

The biggest challenge for using the increased diversity and representation narrative is your influence on team building. If you had a say on who should join the team based on your role – team lead, or project manager or any managerial role, use this narrative. But you must be subtle with the intervention and reasoning behind increasing DEI. It can’t just be based on a value. You must balance value with the ROI of increasing DEI. Or include a failure to demonstrate the importance of DEI. The admissions team is aware of the resistance to increasing DEI in many organizations. 

2) Integrate DEI Skills

With the politicization of integrating DEI skills, many applicants reach out to me for assistance with the tone of the essay.  Berkeley is a progressive university. Even if your tone sounds too forward for integrating DEI skills, make sure that you add a few historical contexts on the marginalization of minorities. The best essays have a line or two from a personal or a volunteering experience that demonstrates the need for DEI education. 

3) Cultivate Belonging

If you compare the team composition or even the percentage of women in an MBA class or even workplace, society has made impressive strides. The challenge now is  developing a feeling of belonging. A few common examples I have read are around celebrating food and festivals. Any example where you went a step further would help you stand out.

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Berkeley Haas MBA Essay Guide

Question 1: What makes you feel alive when you are doing it, and why? (300 words maximum) (Video Essay)

Question 2: What are your short-term and long-term career goals, and how will an MBA from Haas help you achieve those goals? Short-term career goals should be achievable within 3-5 years post-MBA, whereas long-term goals may span a decade or more and encompass broader professional aspirations. (300 words max)

Question 3: Distance Traveled: At Berkeley Haas, we consider "distance traveled" as the contextual information that helps us understand the unique circumstances, challenges, or influences that have shaped your personal and professional journey.

We invite you to share aspects of your background, personal circumstances, or significant experiences that have meaningfully impacted who you are today and how you've reached this point. Please tell us how these experiences have influenced your perspectives, decisions, and aspirations, and how they contribute to the person you are becoming. (300 words max)

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