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Sample MBA Recommendation Letter - Please comment on the applicant's potential for leadership.

Applicants need to think through past experiences to find the stories that best illustrate leadership skills. The most effective examples may not be the first to come to mind.

What kind of experiences will make the best tales of leadership?

Think about challenges where the following came into play:

  • Identifying/defining a problem
  • Being open to new information, input, etc.
  • Building consensus with appropriate stakeholders
  • Guiding strong mid-course corrections; overcoming mistakes
  • Building on success
  • Articulating a vision
  • Resisting conventional approaches; challenging status quo
  • Convincing others of importance of problem
  • Marshaling resources to address problem
  • Motivating others
  • Making good use of others’ talents
  • Permanently upgrading organization’s capabilities; institutionalizing solutions
  • Illustrating methods for other individuals, organizations, etc.

Sample MBA Recommendation Letter - Applicant's potential for leadership

Details of your working style

AJ bears exceptional leadership abilities. In internal discussions or project meetings, he would always raise some thoughtful points or questions, which had led us to think thoroughly about the challenges that we were facing. He would quickly empower the team and has an uncanny ability to focus on the bigger picture of the project. He creates a space for free exchange of ideas and encourages his teammates to debate over it .This process has often helped him in coming out with a clear plan and involving the team in all aspects of the project.

Specific Examples

He has portrayed his leadership skill throughout his tenure in Company X. In projects like for Client Y, UK, he proved his leadership skill by taking ownership of projects and delivering an impressive output with his team even before the schedule. He has taken responsibility beyond our expectation and has played a proactive role in handling high-pressure project deadlines.

Capacity to learn

He has shown his potential for leadership not only in handling projects but also in learning new technologies. Technology A was a tough one to learn. He led the team and learned this technology in a very short duration of time. More than learning, what I like about AJ is the ability to apply his skills. His judgment on the right technology as an interface was the key factor in the success of Project X


Diverse experiences and creativity

AJ’s experience in handling projects across the world including <mention countries) would contribute to the learning experience of the entering class. I strongly believe that AJ will become a first generation entrepreneur in a few years from now, running a successful business venture. He has sincerity, commitment, and the ability to think out of the box . He always lead from the front and creates the right pressure for his team to excel. An MBA from Z business school would definitely polish his skills and make him a bright entrepreneur/(Your long term goal)


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