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Harvard MBA Curiosity and Growth Essay Tips

Our curiosity is driven by internal motivations - desire for new information, openness to novel stimuli, finding the last piece of the puzzle, and a strong urge to escape boredom.

For Harvard MBA application essay on curiosity and growth, thrill seeking and curiosity to escape boredom has limited relevance. 

Your essay examples should convey one or four combinations of motivations for curiosity – innate desire to fill the information gap, positive association with unraveling world’s mysteries, genuine interest in peers, customers & beneficiaries, and acceptance of uncertainty that comes with exploring new ideas. 

Tone and Examples: These motivations can be captured either through examples or the tone with which you narrate the problem, the solution, and the growth you experienced pursuing your curiosity. 

Among the many examples I have read, 6 use cases cover most of the curiosity and growth narrative:

1.  Exploration of Solution

2.  Curiosity and Cultural Change  – Organizational Growth

3.  Communication and Curiosity

4.  Curiosity, Courage and Growth – New Product Ideas

5.  Learning Goals and Curiosity

6.  Diversity and Curiosity

1.  Exploration of Solution

Most innovation happens after persisting through bad ideas, pivoting at the right time, finding an idea that is an evolution of the original idea or a completely different stream of ideas that has no connection with the original idea.

In Harvard MBA essays on curiosity and growth, sharing the process of how you reached a solution conveys the authenticity of your trait as a curious problem solver.

Technology and Financial solutions are some of the best examples where exploration of solutions can be tied to curiosity. 

In Technology, proof of concept or prototyping is a classic example of curiosity leading to a germ for an idea that became a new product or became an entry point for a new market.

In Private Equity, I read of an idea to enter a new geography purely by innovation in how certain data was evaluated. The data existed for 30 years. Even with machine learning and analytical tools, no one bothered to look at the data with a context on the stability of the political system and loan rate in the country. With the applicant’s innovative thinking, leveraging the country’s low borrowing rate for global acquisitions became a standard practice. Make sure that recommenders unambiguously credit you for any industry innovation.

2.    Curiosity and Cultural Change  – Organizational Growth

In corporate culture where productivity is king, introducing processes, frameworks and systems that encourage greater autonomy can be a challenge.

Capturing the challenge and finding a system or framework that is a negotiable middle-ground to balance productivity with autonomy are some of the believable narratives I have read.

New Framework: I remember an operations manager who had systems in place for optimizing the productivity of each factory worker. Despite documenting and optimizing for each movement, the improvement in productivity was marginal. To understand the gaps in his understanding, he introduced a digital forum where everyone, from the worker on the floor to the middle manager, can offer feedback without any repercussions. Because of the variation in education across the teams, written communication was a challenge for factory workers. He introduced an audio messaging option that brought in feedback from floor workers. Some of the feedback was crucial in recognizing gaps in his own understanding of the factors that limit productivity at a worker level.

His curiosity to unearth the productivity gap by introducing a new communication framework was crucial for changing the organization from a rigid hierarchal to an open culture.

New Learning Systems: An applicant who was a manager, shared how his curiosity to find the reasons for a string of deal failures led to the creation of a library of ‘case studies’ for his business development (BD) team.

By encouraging the team to author cases by engaging with top BD persons, every deal details – strategies, templates, context around the offering, and reasons for wins and losses were documented. Instead of a generic how not to write a proposal, the losing and winning cases offered a much larger perspective on factors that matter in a deal.

A discussion forum around the cases also became active, leading to internalizing best practices in proposal creation and communicating with clients.

New Process: Even in flat organizations, there are processes on how a deal is closed, how to send a proposal, how to communicate with clients and so on.

Any examples that curiously questions accepted norms that have become irrelevant in new paradigm of doing business are excellent examples of an applicant’s curiosity influencing an organization’s processes.

For an office where work from home had become a unique selling proposition for retaining star performers, entry level employees were finding it challenging to fill the skill gap that the star performers had mastered.

Instead of interrupting the star performers, who had systems in place to maximize their productivity, the applicant – a team lead developed a screen sharing option with the trainees to demonstrate how the star performer researched and built a case for a deal.

By keeping the privacy of the screen sharing to two viewers with an option to ask questions at the end of the research task, trainees learned the critical part of due diligence, while star performers could share their strategies with minimum interruption to their work.

The new process was an innovation in training for the startup.

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3.  Communication and Curiosity

The second important skill after conflict management in a team is communicating values. Instead of sharing an example of demonstrating curiosity, you may share an example where you reinforced curiosity as a value in the team.

Curiosity as a Value: The challenge for a boutique consulting company was that the edge the boutique firm had in offering specialized consulting solutions were replaced by a culture of generic advice and obvious conclusion. Recognizing the change in the culture, an applicant – the CEO, introduced a performance metric where a person’s engagement in a team meeting was also measured.

What started as a high resistance to changing the culture turned into a study on how even the habit of asking questions can lead to deeper insights, creativity and higher sense of well-being.  

Networking  and Career Opportunity: Getting job opportunities from an interaction in a pub to an Uber driver suggesting a technique to fine-tune a media proposal to networking through a non-profit engagement, the paths to finding opportunities for career transitions or closing a deal are diverse.

Sharing your attitude towards networking and how curiosity is driving you to find opportunities from unconventional sources are one way to reiterate your unique quality.

The applicant who found a better way to stand out in the proposal converted an advertising pitch to an acquisition.

The applicant who commented on the techniques of the football players in the pub received an offer for a career change.

The networking technique the applicant employed to attract a high-profile investor impressed a peer in a non-profit so much that he recommended the applicant to his firm. A change in career from Technology to Venture Capital ensued with no additional degrees.

Networking and Curiosity – Fundamental to Better Questions: The number of LinkedIn requests I get with a transactional goal could very well be interpreted as a problem of networking in modern times. But on reflection, such networking strategy from professionals is from lack of one quality - curiosity.

A better networker will find ways to ask deeper questions and understand the other person’s perspective, priorities and thoughts on what is ailing their industry. Often such deep questions build relationship that go beyond transactional requests. Once the foundational relationship is built and frequency of communication is established, it becomes much easier to ask for help.

The best examples of outreach through LinkedIn all involve spending hours understanding the person’s journey, values and even perspective about controversial topics.

For one applicant, networking through LinkedIn with a contact started as a bridge to reach a superstar fund manager. The person she reached had around 15 persons in the network, but among them were three superstar fund managers. From this data, she could infer that the link to the high-value leads had an interesting life of her own. Without a manipulative strategy to request for connecting to the superstar fund managers, she started asking questions about real estate – the niche the contact was specializing in. After a week of discussing some of the evolving issues on taxation and regulation, the contact revealed that she was the wife of the fund manager. Without any requests for connection, she suggested that her husband would be of better help in guiding the applicant with advice on investment strategies.

Deeper connections are established with deeper questions.

Deeper questions cannot be formulated without curiosity.

Share one such example of curious questioning that led you to a path of professional growth.

4.  Curiosity, Courage and Growth – New Product Ideas

Model T: The classic case of curiosity driving growth and fear of challenging the status quo limiting product innovation is the example of Model T.  From a new design in 1908 to mass production in 1913 to selling half of all the cars in America in 1926 to stopping the production in 1927 on Edsel Ford’s insistence are timelines that mimic many of the current product lifecycles.

Henry Ford revolutionized the mass market adoption of cars by focusing on markets that were hesitant to consider the ‘luxury’ product.

Farmers and rural residents found cars to be a threat to their livelihood with increased competition for horse and buggy, and migration to their neighbourhood with easy access to roads. It is only when Ford revolutionized the design with lightweight materials, and assembly line manufacturing that cars became affordable across income groups.

The same curiosity that expanded the markets for cars from a status symbol to a utilitarian device faded away when Ford had over 50% market share in 1926. With customer preferences changing, it was only a matter of time before the market dominance would diminish.

Edsel Ford recognized the new market reality and pushed for a more modern design.

Any example of product innovation, if you are in Finance, Technology, or in an advisory role for a large consumer goods brand, can be narrated through the two dynamics – curiosity and innovation and fear of change limiting risk-taking.

5.    Learning Goals and Curiosity

Prior Knowledge and self-awareness of prior knowledge determine, to a large degree, how you learn.

Curiosity from learning at HBS and customizing the curriculum to achieve your post-MBA goals with learning goals are measured by how realistically you evaluate your learning milestones.

Standardized tests and GPA offer insights on your learning progression, but to truly leverage the HBS curriculum, curiosity is essential.

For one applicant, who had acquired significant domain expertise in Finance, the case study method was a tool to acquire business knowledge, cultural intelligence and a framework to make decisions, and not just functional knowledge. But he was deeply aware of his knowledge gap.

Applicants convey this vulnerability through the tone of their narrative or in reflecting on a gap that led to a failure.

For a growth narrative, explaining a failure and how you curiously broke down the cause of the failure could lead to unique essays on learning.

6.    Diversity and Curiosity

Several of the solutions to build diversity of ideas, perspective and talent in a team revolves around hiring and recruitment practice.

The influence of diverse talent on reaching new markets (product), strategy (marketing), and solutions (technology) is evident in the recent DEI research at top consulting firms.

For Harvard, applicants must tweak the traditional DEI narratives phrased at Stanford or Columbia, where the narrative is often from a historical perspective. A mix of historical perspectives but, more importantly, the business case for diversity works better for HBS.

Curiously finding solutions that reimagines traditional talent sourcing techniques is a common strategy to connect diversity and curiosity.

For one applicant in Talent acquisition, the strategy was to include a list of traditionally African American names in LinkedIn search using the ‘OR’ operator to shortlist talents that are often overlooked in traditional referral based hiring where the predominant ethnicity in the company determines the newly available talent pool.

References
•    Curiosity: The neglected trait that drives success
•    End of Model T
•    THE MODEL T - Shari Eli Joshua K. Hausman Paul Rhode

 

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  • Harvard MBA Essay Guide (20 Sample Essays)

    Growth-Oriented Essay: Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth. (up to 250 words) 

    Example #1: Persistence Narrative 
    Background Information: The applicant – a design and music talent, shares her journey through several setbacks. She attributes curiosity to her growth.  
    Curiosity: Philosophy  
    Curiosity (Explained): Curiosity as a philosophy is tough to translate into a narrative unless you are from the creative industry or your contributions had an influence on a solution or an initiative.  
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to capture the humanity of the applicant and her influence in music instead of just highlighting how she overcame multiple roadblocks to gain attention as a designer.  
    Theme: Persistence  
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Life Starts at NO (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example) 

    Example #2: International Community Building 
    Background Information: The applicant, a Machine Learning (ML) entrepreneur specializing in healthcare diagnostics, shares how his curiosity to learn other ML algorithms’ evolution in diagnosing Alzheimer’s, cancer, and heart disease transformed his platform into a global community. 
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to show the applicant’s contributions in diagnostic from 2020 to 2024 by citing two events. Such examples build credibility instead of engagements that were recent. The evolution of the platform from an AI development community to a community for discussing the application of AI in diagnostics is captured through a ‘curiosity’ angle.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Growth through Collaboration (AI in Healthcare) (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #3: Culture
    Background Information: The applicant, an Entrepreneur from India narrates his first entrepreneurial experience – facilitating exchange of stamps in the late 1990s.
    Theme: Culture
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Instead of addressing the biases in the investor community that could turn preachy, I wanted to focus on the applicant and his entrepreneurial journey by citing two entrepreneurial experiences – a platform(club) for stamp collection and his Grocery delivery App.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – The American Dream (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #4: Addiction
    Background Information: The applicant – a beneficiary of the foster home system, captures the sacrifice his adopted grandparents made to save him from a path of addiction. Paying it back through early intervention among teenagers and community engagement is the curiosity narrative.
    Theme: Addiction
    MBA Essay Strategy:  My strategy is to capture a gratitude narrative in the first one-third of the essay to demonstrate motivation for starting the venture and dedicate the latter part of the essay to the unique solution
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Drug Addiction and Gaming (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #5: Scarcity
    Background Information: The applicant, an education major, recognizes that 70% of all students in Kenya don’t have a computer. The curiosity that drives him to pivot from one solution to another is the growth narrative.
    Theme: Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Often, innovation is captured with a ‘hero’ narrative where the applicant is the sole originator of an idea. I wanted to break that cliché and include a person from whom the applicant learned to use a concept called ‘scaffolding.’
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Scarcity (Growth-Oriented HBS Essay Example)

    Example #6: FinTech
    Background Information: The applicant captures a vulnerable moment of a beneficiary to compare his journey of side hustle before a technology giant noticed his talent. Although cryptocurrency is not a flavor for the year, capture niches where innovation is still happening. 
    Theme: Education, Child Welfare
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Empathizing with a techno solution is tough without a strong backstory around the beneficiary. For the essay, I wanted to clearly establish the beneficiary – Rami, before the applicant narrates the similarities to his journey and finally shares the solution that emerged from his curiosity.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – FinTech as a Tool for Good (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #7: Learning from the best
    Background Information: The applicant – a Remote Engineer in the Oil and Gas industry, reflects on a value that has helped her learn from the best regardless of her geographical limitations.
    Theme: Learning
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The effectiveness of the case-study method depends on the assumption that peers in a Harvard MBA class will help elevate your learning experience. For the essay, I have highlighted the applicant’s recognition of this value proposition with three examples.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Learning from the Best (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #8: Military & Search for IMPACT
    Background Information: The most common narrative for US military applicants is to quote 9/11 and the reaction your immediate family had while watching the events unfold. The horrifying moment is captured as a motivation to join the Military. On digging deeper, most applicants would share that their motivations were diverse.
    Theme: Career Choice
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I wanted to quickly highlight that the applicant had the choice of entering any industry. One achievement to demonstrate his curiosity that I shared in the first half is the invention of a game. Since the game is mentioned in the resume and verifiable through search, I didn’t quote the name. By clearly highlighting the person’s curiosity and career options, the family legacy is used as a factor in joining the military.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Career Choice after a Military Career (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)
     
    Leadership-Focused Essay: What experiences have shaped who you are, how you invest in others, and what kind of leader you want to become? (up to 250 words)

    Example #9: Small Business Values
    Background Information: The applicant - a second-generation Asian American, is familiar with the values of fiscal conservatism, building relationships, and understanding the daily struggles of the community through his family’s department store.
    Theme: Customer-Centric
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The applicant’s role in developing an App for the store is highlighted in the essay at a crucial part of the narrative so that the essay is not all about his father. I have also humanized the journey – by sharing how upset the father was when the revenues fell by 40%. The essay is about the transformation in the applicant’s value from a person chasing productivity and optimization technique to someone who is truly thinking about the customers. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Small Business Values (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #10: Breaking Away from Family Business
    Background Information: A unique challenge that applicants whose parents are public figures or CXOs of businesses or entrepreneurs are the pressure to live up to the parent’s standards or milestones. For the leadership narrative, the burden of legacy is established before the narrative addresses his leadership principles.
    Theme: Authenticity  
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, I want to capture an entrepreneur’s journey to rise above his entrepreneur father’s image. But I didn’t want to make the entire essay about this complex dynamics. The narrative is around the applicant’s focus on customers and surrounding with teams who keeps him grounded. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Breaking Away from Family Business(Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #11: Creativity and Communication 
    Background Information: When the overall percentage of users with internet access is 62% in South Africa and the inequality accentuated by the rural and urban divide, the applicant endured the lack of digital infrastructure, and spending close to 22% of the family income on gaining relevant information on schools, global exams, and financial assistance. 
    Theme: Creativity, Communication
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The strategy is to share why the applicant values no distraction in a child’s home for optimum education experience. Then I highlight the many roadblocks the applicant’s non-profit faced in receiving fee waiver for their cooperative run ISP.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Non-Profit (Telecom) (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #12: Mental Health
    Background Information: The applicant like most didn’t pay much attention to the mental health epidemic until tragedy hit home.
    Theme: Communication, Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  A question we frequently get from applicants is whether they should cite tragedy in the family as a motivation for a venture or a non-profit initiative. As long as you don’t linger too much on the tragedy and offer a balanced narrative, there are no restrictions on leveraging unique stories from your life. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Mental Health (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #13: Trauma, Healing & Finding Authentic Self
    Background Information: The applicant narrates the absurdity of war in the narrative about the duties in Kabul, and the trauma. Instead of wallowing in on the horror, the applicant takes what makes military applicants strong and guides unprivileged children build life and leadership skills.
    Theme: Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing PTSD in an essay, the healing process, and the cues that helped the applicant are too sacred to be shared in a Harvard MBA application essay. However, with the right motivation and narrative arcs, you can capture the essence of your journey without sharing the darkest secrets. That is what I did by merging two stories – the horrors of the war with a non-profit engagement.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Military & PTSD (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #14: Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra
    Background Information: In this narrative, the applicant captures Peru’s Silver mining boom of 2006. The growth experienced in her father’s business shifted the family’s economic status to a new stratosphere. Through the changing economic and family dynamics, the applicant finds her voice in a unique way, initially to record her unheard voice but later as one of the youngest subject matter experts in mining and commodities.  
    Theme: Failure
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, the strategy is to show how life’s unpredictability is a blessing. By narrating two setback events, the essay demonstrates the applicant’s resilience and her acknowledgment of people who made a comeback possible.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #15: War, Immigration and Starting Over Again
    Background Information: Despite a raging war in Syria, the family of the applicant was unblemished by the chaos. The strategic government assets near the applicant’s house would have made the region an easy target, but it was not. The calmness of her journey is shattered in one event. From the privileges of a cocooned life, the applicant is forced to think about survival, her sister’s future, and her future in the US. The second half of the narrative captures the change that was forced on her. 
    Theme: Gratitude, Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I consciously chose not to start the essay with a dialogue or trauma. Two lines are allocated to set up the narrative before the trauma event.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – War, Immigration and Starting Over Again (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay: Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve. (up to 300 words)

    Example #16: Creative or Finance
    Background Information: The applicant starts the narrative with the origin of her talents. The unbridled enthusiasm receives a reality check when in high school, the applicant’s father has a conversation with her about academics. While the applicant picked up her quant skills, she was reaching over 50,000 loyal fans, and her videos captured 1 million views. 
    Theme: Passion, Talent
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing vulnerability is the toughest part for Harvard MBA applicants. For this essay example, I have captured the applicant’s uncertainty about career choice throughout the essay. Here the goal is to show vulnerability in the career choice essay while for leadership and growth essay, I could capture one example each from creative and PE industry respectively to balance the narrative. So don’t follow this example without a strategy.  
    Read: Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay – Creative or Finance (Business-Minded HBS MBA Essay Example)

  • Stanford MBA Essay Guide (24 Sample Essays)
  • Columbia MBA Essay Guide (21 Sample Essays)
  • Wharton MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • INSEAD MBA Essay Guide (19 Sample Essays)
  • Darden MBA Essay Guide  (21 Sample Essays) 
  • Yale SOM MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • Tuck MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • Haas MBA Essay Guide (18 Sample Essays)
  • NYU Stern MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays + 6 Examples - Visual Essay)
  • LBS MBA Essay Guide (6 Sample Essays)
  • MIT Sloan MBA Essay Guide (6 Sample Cover Letters + 3 Sample Video Statement Scripts + 3 Sample Optional Essays)
  • Kellogg MBA Essay Guide (11 Sample Essays)
  • Chicago Booth MBA Essay Guide (12 Sample Essays)
  • Ross MBA Essay Guide (31 Sample Essays)
  • Duke Fuqua MBA Essay Guide (10 Sample Essays + Two 25 Random Things Samples)
  • Cambridge MBA Essay Guide (12 Sample Essays)

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