When the Admission team is reading your essays, they are not expecting writers who can take them to a world far far away. What is the point anyways? Post-MBA, your job would be to cut the fluff, and focus on the problem. Memos, reports, and emails expect you to stay as far away from narratives and backstories. Then why do MBA Admission teams expect applicants to write interesting narrative?
Experience what the Applicant Experienced
Empathy is not a learned skill. It’s part of our DNA where we feel what others are feeling. The study on empathy took a hysterical high with “Mirror neurons,” when Graduate Students at the University of Parma, Italy, accidentally found out how empathy is ingrained in monkeys. The students were conducting studies on macaque monkeys by implanting electrodes in their brain. During the lunch break, they accidently kept the electrodes on the monkey and came back with food. As one of the students was reaching out for the food, the neurons in the monkey started firing signals in the same region of the brain that is responsible for planning and movement. By merely watching humans eat, macaque monkeys were able to experience the hand movement.
I am not suggesting that the MBA Admission teams are like monkeys, but interesting narrative helps us experience movement, and for the essays reviewers, narratives that help them experience movement, make the review process interesting. Without evoking interest in your profile, you don’t have much of a chance.
Guard the Brand
There are very few people in the world who can narrate stories like Nolan or Spielberg, and even few MBA Applicants who can write interesting narratives in a Quant oriented world. The few who try to emulate the great writers, fall for the grandiose of the writing process, and starts creating stories that magnify their achievements, or fudge facts to make the journey of the hero interesting. The admission team knows that it is a privilege to be included in an elite Business School brand. The reviewers understand the privilege, and they know that with a few bad choices, the brand value can dilute. The applicants will no longer consider being part of the brand a privilege.
Remember BlackBerry - the darling of the Enterprise world. It was a privilege to own a blackberry phone, but with iPhone’s entry, and a small dip in the market share, the owners of BlackBerry began to panic, and started making models for the masses while Apple focused on their core market – the hip tech savvy crowd. By accepting the ‘commoners’ to experience BlackBerry, the brand no longer catered to the Managers and CEOs, and the sales started dropping. The loyal customers switched brands to the ‘elite’ Apple iPhone. The Admission team will continue to keep the 5-10% acceptance rate in 2008 like depression or 2000 like boom. No matter how much fun you make of the Apple Customers, boy wouldn’t you love to have loyalty like that. “Be like the Apple Customer. Believe in the MBA brand. It will reflect in your narrative.”
Spot the Liar
When you write essays with just facts not evoking any emotion, the Admission team has to do two things: do fact checking, and do due diligence to make sure that your profile is not like hundreds of other applicants. With volume goals, the reviewers don’t have the luxury to run fact checking through each sentence. Narratives, on the other hand, entertain the reviewer and make it easier for her to spot the inconsistencies.
That is why being a movie critic is the easiest job. You have to spot inconsistencies in behavior – for both protagonist and antagonist, inconsistencies in the plot or inconsistency in motivation. When you narrate your achievements, imagine that your story will be adapted to a movie. How will the movie critic rate your story? Will they find inconsistencies in the hero’s (you) journey, behavior or the external circumstances that forced the hero to change?
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+Harvard MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
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+ Stanford MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
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+ Chicago Booth MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
#1. Modern Art = Make you Think
#2. Teamwork and Individual Ambition
#4. Diversity = Creativity
#5. Classroom Experience
#6. Harper Center
+ Columbia MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Sample Columbia MBA Essay 1: Enterprise Technology to Consumer Marketing (495 Words)
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+ Kellogg MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
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Sample Essay 2: Achievements and Failures
Sample Essay 3: Extra-Curricular and How enriched you are
+ Haas MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
Sample MBA Essay: Non-Profit
Sample MBA Essay: Technology
Sample MBA Essay: Marketing
Sample MBA Essay: Getting Fired
Sample MBA Essay: Diverse and Inclusive Culture
Sample MBA Essay: Leadership
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+ Yale SOM MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
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+ Ross MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
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Sample MBA Essay: Consulting (Made a Difference)
Sample MBA Essay: Losing a Client (Resilience)
Sample MBA Essay: Finance to Marketing (extra-curricular)
Sample MBA Essay: I am Aware that I am different
Sample MBA Essay: I find it Challenging when People
Sample MBA Essay: A valuable thing I have taught someone
Sample Essay – Part 2 (Short-term & Long-Term Goals, skills relevant to your career goals and how Ross
prepares you for the goals)
+ Wharton MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
7 Professional Gains
Sample Wharton MBA Essay 1: What do you hope to gain professionally from the Wharton MBA? (473 words)
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+ London Business School MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
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London as the Technology Hub
London as the Consulting Hub
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+ Darden MBA Essay Tips (2019 Entering Class)
Sample Darden MBA Essay – About yourself Personal, Professional or Both (100 Words) (Near Death Experience)
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Sample Darden MBA Essay – Evolving Leadership Style (198 Words)
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Sample Darden MBA Essay: Short-term Post-MBA career goal (149 words)
+ Duke Fuqua MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
Framework for Answering the Duke Fuqua Short-Answer Essay Questions
Sample Short-term Goals Essay – Technology to Consulting (100 Words)
Sample Long-term Goals Essay – Consulting for Government (100 Words)
Sample Long-term Goals Essay – Plan B (89 Words)
Framework for Answering the Duke Fuqua 25 Random Things
Sample Duke Fuqua Essay: The Fuqua community and you (Max 2 Pages)
+ NYU Stern MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
Sample NYU Stern Essay 1: Goals (498 Words)
Essay 3: Personal Expression (a.k.a. "Pick Six")
5 Examples with Images
+ Sample Essays
+ The Art of Storytelling
+ Leadership Narratives
+ Review Tips
+ Persuasion Strategies
+ The Secret to "unleashing" your unique voice
+ How to write about your Strengths
+ How to write about your Weaknesses