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Preference or Discrimination - Tuck MBA Essay Sense of Inclusion Tips

The school’s culture and openness to embrace the idealistic values of the current generation determines the language you use in MBA Essays. For Tuck, emotionally strong words are not the norm. However, the school is open to reading challenging scenarios and debate-inducing political subjects if the applicant has the skills to define the problem in an apolitical narrative. That is the first iteration of our edit – removing redundant political statements.

Before you interpret a preference as racism or Discrimination for the Tuck MBA Sense of Inclusion Essay, follow these three best practices

Was it Discrimination?

I remember having a call with a building owner who had this beautiful property to let out as an office. When I shared that I worked in the Admissions market, his voice changed, and in no uncertain terms said that he is not interested in giving out his property to ‘study abroad’ programs. His ignorance was in broadly classifying the consultant who preys on students with the promise of a better future and a consultant who has built his reputation ground up with years of assisting applicants get into M7 and T20 into ‘study abroad’ consultants.

Did I feel that he was discriminating against a whole profession? Yes. Was it Discrimination or a preference?

Debate Starts – Discrimination or Preference

When does a preference become Discrimination?

A preference of not letting the office to a particular job function, no matter how ignorant, is not Discrimination. But had he mentioned my ethnicity, gender, sexual orientation, nationality, or color while offering the reasoning, the conversation would have turned into a narrative about Discrimination.

Many times, what an applicant cites as Discrimination is just preference. To ensure that you don’t cite the wrong example, share the Discrimination Narrative used for the Tuck MBA Inclusion Essay with friends/family outside your closest circle. Better – share it with us as part of our Tuck MBA Essay Editing Service.

There are universal ideals of fairness that culture doesn’t diminish.

Global Teams vs. Faux Pas Moments vs Discrimination

I have read several Faux Pas moments that were harmless and came from a true ignorance of another culture and not from any malice. Such moments are even more prevalent when the teams are comprised of a fair representation of European, American, and Asian team members. Even within the Asian teams or even the European teams, there are wide variations in culture that are closely tied to the political ideology of the nation. Such an amalgam of worldviews leads to assumptions of deadlines, explicit vs implicit communication, etiquette before business, and many gray areas of communication. These moments are not Discrimination.

But if the team’s nationality or ethnicity is the primary motivation for a person’s reaction or preference, the narrative turns into an ideal example for capturing Discrimination for the Sense of Inclusion Tuck MBA Essays.

Read Dartmouth Tuck MBA Sample Essay on Sense of Inclusion Essay about a Global Team where teammates from Asia had to face unwelcoming comments
 

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