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INSEAD MBA Essay 1 Tips: Give a candid description of yourself (who are you as a person)

Essay 1: Give a candid description of yourself (who are you as a person), stressing the personal characteristics you feel to be your strengths and weaknesses and the main factors which have influenced your personal development, giving examples when necessary (approximately 500 words).

This essay perhaps is one of the toughest questions to answer, not because of the complexity of the question, but for most of us, writing about our weakness is an ego buster. But don't worry. We have covered strategies to present your weaknesses in our Essay Guide. INSEAD MBA Admissions team knows that leaders have one unifying quality – “they have an encyclopedic awareness of their Strengths and Weaknesses.”

Why is Self-Awareness Important?

Self-awareness evaluates your leadership quality. If you have never reflected, at least informally, about your weakness, you are blinded by the halo of grandiose – a quality that is cited as the major reason why top performing professionals are rejected from the application pool.

Team Building

The value of self-awareness is not limited to your emotional intelligence but acts as the foundation for team building. A competent team needs functional experts. While recruiting, leaders have to pick individuals who complement their skills. Even if a team leader picks the right mix of skills and temperament, the dynamic nature of the technology landscape and consumer preferences means leaders have:

1) To continuously monitor the skills of the team
2) Set up training schedule based on the team’s strengths and weaknesses
3) Set up training program according to changing markets

During the learning process, to develop new skills and mitigate the risk of skill deficiency, teams have to collect real-time feedback about the experience. After the training, the leader has to evaluate whether the acquired skills have helped the candidates.

INSEAD MBA Essay GuideEvaluating weaknesses and strengths of the team as a unit, and at an individual level is a skill that Managers and leaders should possess. Without a clear understanding about the skills, tasks will be misallocated, problems will remain unresolved, and projects delayed. Other secondary traits that you can highlight as a leader is included in our Essay Guide. Download here.

Emotional Intelligence

We are not talking about excessive self-praise. Even high-performing team needs a leader who recognizes the fears and insecurities of the team and takes small but essentials steps to ease the tension.

For INSEAD, they want candidates who can recognize their and the team’s strengths and weaknesses. This quality would play a major role during negotiations, sales pitch, and motivating the team towards challenging goals.

Self-Development

When you describe your strengths and weaknesses, don’t just list them out in a plain vanilla form. Use one life-changing event to demonstrate your strengths, and cite the weaknesses that you had to overcome to meet the goals, jump a hurdle, or overcome a setback. Overcoming a setback is a narrative that will encapsulate both weaknesses (the reason for your setback), and strengths (overcoming them).

The most common essays are about Time Management with four variations:

1) A key member leaves the team.

Will the departure lead to missed deadlines?

2) A complex project assigned to an inexperienced team.

Is delay inevitable?

3) An unforeseen problem starts to plague the schedule.

Will the problem cause the team to miss the final deadline?

4) An overbearing customer adds requirements at the last stage of the project.

Will the change in scope impact project delivery and team morale?

Sample INSEAD MBA Essay: Candid Description - Strengths and Weaknesses (Consulting to Product Development) (492 Words)

The second common essay is about leadership.

1) A well-defined problem – increase market share, develop a solution, lead a dysfunctional team, spread the brand, or resurrect a dying brand.
2) Making tough decisions – closing down loss-making departments, products, and services, that include restructuring the company.
3) Motivating the talent– another common leadership narrative is about how the leader manages to spot the talent, nurture them through customized learning modules, and motivate them to solve challenging problems in the project.

INSEAD Sample Strengths & Weaknesses Essay (Marketing Lead)

Instead of picking one aspect of leadership and time management, we recommend that you mix it up and show how the event followed the W-pattern. Read the chapter “Capture the ‘W’ Pattern in your MBA Essay"

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F1GMAT's INSEAD MBA Essay Guide

Question 1: Provide a summary of your career since graduating from university, explaining the rationale behind your key decisions and career progression. Include a description of your current (or most recent) role, covering the scope of your work, major responsibilities, employees under your supervision, budget size, clients/products, and any notable results achieved. (500 words)

Question 2: Describe your short and long-term career aspirations, including your target geography, industry, and function. How do you plan to bridge the gap between your current position and these goals, and how will INSEAD help you achieve them? (300 words)

Question 3: Give a candid description of yourself as a person and a leader, emphasising the strengths and weaknesses you recognise in yourself. Explain how you are actively working on your development, sharing key experiences that have shaped you, providing specific examples where relevant. (500 words)

Question 4: Describe a highly stressful situation you faced and how you managed it. What did this experience teach you about yourself and your interactions with others? (400 words)

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