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Insead MBA Essay Tips 2015-16

Essay 3: Tell us about an experience where you were significantly impacted by cultural diversity, in a positive or negative way (approximately 300 words).

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The latest INSEAD MBA represents 90 Nationalities with 30% each from Asia/Pacific and Northern/Western Europe, and 16% from the United States and Canada. Central/Western Europe (11%), Africa (3%), Latin America (5%), and the Middle East (5%) represent the rest of the puzzle. Unlike US-based Business Schools where 30-35% are International, 90% of INSEAD MBA class are international. This is due to two reasons. One, the demand for MBA in local markets is comparatively low and two, International students find 1-year and 16-month programs more attractive.

From a competition point of view, INSEAD competes directly with London Business School, and top programs in the US – Harvard, Wharton, Stanford, and Columbia. The Admission team understands that you have also applied to other top programs, and probably have an invite to join them. INSEAD does not want to waste their resources pursuing candidates who are not motivated by the diversity of the class.

A 90- nationality class is more or less like a UN summit meeting – an experience even top MBA programs in the US cannot offer. The school knows it and wants to check whether you realize it as well. Students with Business Administration and Engineering background mostly represent the undergraduate course experience of the latest MBA class, while the professional experience of the class is distributed among Corporate Sector, Consulting, and Finance. There isn’t much diversity when it comes to professional experience and undergraduate degree. So the school is betting on the experiences that come with diverse nationalities.


Why Diversity Matters for Businesses


Businesses look towards schools for training professionals. One thing Business don’t want are experts who have just worked in one domain in a country for 3-4 years. Knowledge about a market is easily acquired but finding professionals who have worked in more than one country and experienced a multi-dimensional perspective about challenges in a market is rare. Schools can instill cultural sensitivity, but real experiences depend on the candidate’s pre-MBA work experience. That is why profiles that have mentioned traveling as a hobby stand out from the pool of nerdy applicants.

The second reason is creativity. If you follow the American way of problem solving, which has become the norm in UK, Canada, Germany and India – time is of the utmost importance, but if you work with other cultures, problem solving is defined through the perspective of contexts and finding the hidden meaning behind what the consumers wants.

Do note that a multi-national class doesn’t mean that the Buddhist philosophy of looking at obstacles will originate from a Japanese candidate. The stark difference in how Businesses interact with customers and partners might be visible to the American candidate, who has worked in Japan for 3-5 years, more than the native Japanese candidate with limited travel experience. Schools realize the value of attracting candidates who have such multilayered perspective.

The third reason is the talent pool. Google and Microsoft didn’t promote CEOs of Indian origin by accident. The Two American tech giants realized it much earlier that if they were to recruit from the narrow talent pool based on nationality, they would miss real talents for the job. That does not mean that European schools follow a similar philosophy. There are language barriers in France, Spain and Italy, but when you analyze the recruiter list for INSEAD, the majority of them are American companies, who follow the “Best Man for the Job” philosophy, especially for the Tech and Finance industry.



Consulting in Europe is still influenced by local recruitment patterns primarily because candidates have to interact with local clients on a regular basis. No matter how good you are at picking up a foreign language in say 2-3 years, missing the nuances of local language means missing requirements during project planning or losing out during negotiation. Businesses are not ready to take that risk. For boutique consulting companies, language is still a barrier but for the 3 big Cs, opportunities are equal.

The fourth major reason schools want diversity is because of the program’s wide reach. A school that can acquire candidates from 90 nationalities is unheard even in Google and Microsoft. The MBA program does the vetoing process, and recruiters are given a guarantee that the candidate has a minimum viable qualification to master new skills. Your GMAT and GPA does the first round of filtering, but Management functions – Consulting, Marketing, Finance, and Operations are different from the traditional functional expertise.

Schools need candidates who can adapt to a new culture, pick a new language, solve local customer problems, and communicate effectively with all stakeholders. MBA programs can enhance your skills but starting with a clean slate is a risk that schools won’t take. That is the reason the majority of candidates recruited by INSEAD have 5-7 years of experience.

INSEAD is hoping that by the time you join the program, you would have worked in 2-3 countries on at least three projects under a couple of different company cultures. Business Schools are the matchmakers in a modern economy, meticulously filling the specialist roles shared by the Employers with MBA candidate having the right skill set.

Now that you know why Schools and Employers value diversity, highlight your experience in such a way that you portray sensitivity towards diverse cultures. Share how cultural diversity has helped your team meet the challenges in communication, problem solving, and negotiations in new markets.

Start with the Context


Describe the team composition – the nationalities, the language barriers, and the diverse skill set of the team members. Remember, the word limit is only 300 words, which means that you will have to finish offering context with just three sentences. The majority of the length should be spent on explaining the problem and how diversity in the team, allowed you to solve the problem creatively.

Explain how cognitive diversity influenced framing of the problem and pushed the team forward. If your company has a culture of recruiting diverse personality types, explain how the policy aggregated professionals who were analytical, creative and social – three skills required to look at complex customer problems with multiple viewpoints.

Impact on you


The Admission team wants to know how you absorb diverse ideas and cultures. Writing favorably about the experience with generic statements will make your essay look like thousands of other essays.

Recent research about diversity in the team has some interesting findings. Mention them only if you had a similar experience.

Case for Diversity


1) New Team Member different from the Group, improves productivity


Even though a new team member, who is socially similar to the group, will result in greater camaraderie among team members, the addition will negatively influence the team’s productivity, especially while working on problem solving.


2) Same Team Member in multiple projects diminishes performance


Although familiarity is good when it comes to communication, the same team for multiple projects will result in an agreeable state of mind, which hinders, expressing diverse viewpoints essential for problem solving.


3) Standardization nullifies the Influence of Diversity

Project leaders cannot haphazardly enforce processes. There should be phases in the project where team members from diverse nationality and ethnicity can use free form while coming up with solutions. Standardization in solutions will discourage professionals from thinking freely – primary reason top companies fail to come up with the next world-changing idea, once they have crossed from a start-up to a publicly listed company. If you are going to give a balanced perspective about Diversity, here is one finding worth considering.

Case against Diversity


Little Diversity is worse

INSEAD includes 90 nationalities for a reason. If a team of five is comprised of diverse nationalities with two members from the same country, and the rest of the three from three different countries, the performance will be worse than a team with five different nationalities.

Diversity in ideas and perspective in itself is no guarantee that the team will create great solutions. If you were managing a diverse team, explain how diversity fuels conflict both because of the idea and from miscommunication. How you created a standard for resolving conflict should be a point worth mentioning in the essay. In fact, for a free and passionate exchange of ideas, an environment where conflict does not turn personal is always a pre-requisite.



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  • Harvard MBA Essay Guide (20 Sample Essays)

    Growth-Oriented Essay: Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth. (up to 250 words) 

    Example #1: Persistence Narrative 
    Background Information: The applicant – a design and music talent, shares her journey through several setbacks. She attributes curiosity to her growth.  
    Curiosity: Philosophy  
    Curiosity (Explained): Curiosity as a philosophy is tough to translate into a narrative unless you are from the creative industry or your contributions had an influence on a solution or an initiative.  
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to capture the humanity of the applicant and her influence in music instead of just highlighting how she overcame multiple roadblocks to gain attention as a designer.  
    Theme: Persistence  
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Life Starts at NO (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example) 

    Example #2: International Community Building 
    Background Information: The applicant, a Machine Learning (ML) entrepreneur specializing in healthcare diagnostics, shares how his curiosity to learn other ML algorithms’ evolution in diagnosing Alzheimer’s, cancer, and heart disease transformed his platform into a global community. 
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to show the applicant’s contributions in diagnostic from 2020 to 2024 by citing two events. Such examples build credibility instead of engagements that were recent. The evolution of the platform from an AI development community to a community for discussing the application of AI in diagnostics is captured through a ‘curiosity’ angle.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Growth through Collaboration (AI in Healthcare) (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #3: Culture
    Background Information: The applicant, an Entrepreneur from India narrates his first entrepreneurial experience – facilitating exchange of stamps in the late 1990s.
    Theme: Culture
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Instead of addressing the biases in the investor community that could turn preachy, I wanted to focus on the applicant and his entrepreneurial journey by citing two entrepreneurial experiences – a platform(club) for stamp collection and his Grocery delivery App.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – The American Dream (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #4: Addiction
    Background Information: The applicant – a beneficiary of the foster home system, captures the sacrifice his adopted grandparents made to save him from a path of addiction. Paying it back through early intervention among teenagers and community engagement is the curiosity narrative.
    Theme: Addiction
    MBA Essay Strategy:  My strategy is to capture a gratitude narrative in the first one-third of the essay to demonstrate motivation for starting the venture and dedicate the latter part of the essay to the unique solution
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Drug Addiction and Gaming (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #5: Scarcity
    Background Information: The applicant, an education major, recognizes that 70% of all students in Kenya don’t have a computer. The curiosity that drives him to pivot from one solution to another is the growth narrative.
    Theme: Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Often, innovation is captured with a ‘hero’ narrative where the applicant is the sole originator of an idea. I wanted to break that cliché and include a person from whom the applicant learned to use a concept called ‘scaffolding.’
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Scarcity (Growth-Oriented HBS Essay Example)

    Example #6: FinTech
    Background Information: The applicant captures a vulnerable moment of a beneficiary to compare his journey of side hustle before a technology giant noticed his talent. Although cryptocurrency is not a flavor for the year, capture niches where innovation is still happening. 
    Theme: Education, Child Welfare
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Empathizing with a techno solution is tough without a strong backstory around the beneficiary. For the essay, I wanted to clearly establish the beneficiary – Rami, before the applicant narrates the similarities to his journey and finally shares the solution that emerged from his curiosity.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – FinTech as a Tool for Good (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #7: Learning from the best
    Background Information: The applicant – a Remote Engineer in the Oil and Gas industry, reflects on a value that has helped her learn from the best regardless of her geographical limitations.
    Theme: Learning
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The effectiveness of the case-study method depends on the assumption that peers in a Harvard MBA class will help elevate your learning experience. For the essay, I have highlighted the applicant’s recognition of this value proposition with three examples.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Learning from the Best (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #8: Military & Search for IMPACT
    Background Information: The most common narrative for US military applicants is to quote 9/11 and the reaction your immediate family had while watching the events unfold. The horrifying moment is captured as a motivation to join the Military. On digging deeper, most applicants would share that their motivations were diverse.
    Theme: Career Choice
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I wanted to quickly highlight that the applicant had the choice of entering any industry. One achievement to demonstrate his curiosity that I shared in the first half is the invention of a game. Since the game is mentioned in the resume and verifiable through search, I didn’t quote the name. By clearly highlighting the person’s curiosity and career options, the family legacy is used as a factor in joining the military.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Career Choice after a Military Career (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)
     
    Leadership-Focused Essay: What experiences have shaped who you are, how you invest in others, and what kind of leader you want to become? (up to 250 words)

    Example #9: Small Business Values
    Background Information: The applicant - a second-generation Asian American, is familiar with the values of fiscal conservatism, building relationships, and understanding the daily struggles of the community through his family’s department store.
    Theme: Customer-Centric
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The applicant’s role in developing an App for the store is highlighted in the essay at a crucial part of the narrative so that the essay is not all about his father. I have also humanized the journey – by sharing how upset the father was when the revenues fell by 40%. The essay is about the transformation in the applicant’s value from a person chasing productivity and optimization technique to someone who is truly thinking about the customers. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Small Business Values (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #10: Breaking Away from Family Business
    Background Information: A unique challenge that applicants whose parents are public figures or CXOs of businesses or entrepreneurs are the pressure to live up to the parent’s standards or milestones. For the leadership narrative, the burden of legacy is established before the narrative addresses his leadership principles.
    Theme: Authenticity  
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, I want to capture an entrepreneur’s journey to rise above his entrepreneur father’s image. But I didn’t want to make the entire essay about this complex dynamics. The narrative is around the applicant’s focus on customers and surrounding with teams who keeps him grounded. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Breaking Away from Family Business(Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #11: Creativity and Communication 
    Background Information: When the overall percentage of users with internet access is 62% in South Africa and the inequality accentuated by the rural and urban divide, the applicant endured the lack of digital infrastructure, and spending close to 22% of the family income on gaining relevant information on schools, global exams, and financial assistance. 
    Theme: Creativity, Communication
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The strategy is to share why the applicant values no distraction in a child’s home for optimum education experience. Then I highlight the many roadblocks the applicant’s non-profit faced in receiving fee waiver for their cooperative run ISP.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Non-Profit (Telecom) (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #12: Mental Health
    Background Information: The applicant like most didn’t pay much attention to the mental health epidemic until tragedy hit home.
    Theme: Communication, Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  A question we frequently get from applicants is whether they should cite tragedy in the family as a motivation for a venture or a non-profit initiative. As long as you don’t linger too much on the tragedy and offer a balanced narrative, there are no restrictions on leveraging unique stories from your life. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Mental Health (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #13: Trauma, Healing & Finding Authentic Self
    Background Information: The applicant narrates the absurdity of war in the narrative about the duties in Kabul, and the trauma. Instead of wallowing in on the horror, the applicant takes what makes military applicants strong and guides unprivileged children build life and leadership skills.
    Theme: Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing PTSD in an essay, the healing process, and the cues that helped the applicant are too sacred to be shared in a Harvard MBA application essay. However, with the right motivation and narrative arcs, you can capture the essence of your journey without sharing the darkest secrets. That is what I did by merging two stories – the horrors of the war with a non-profit engagement.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Military & PTSD (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #14: Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra
    Background Information: In this narrative, the applicant captures Peru’s Silver mining boom of 2006. The growth experienced in her father’s business shifted the family’s economic status to a new stratosphere. Through the changing economic and family dynamics, the applicant finds her voice in a unique way, initially to record her unheard voice but later as one of the youngest subject matter experts in mining and commodities.  
    Theme: Failure
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, the strategy is to show how life’s unpredictability is a blessing. By narrating two setback events, the essay demonstrates the applicant’s resilience and her acknowledgment of people who made a comeback possible.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #15: War, Immigration and Starting Over Again
    Background Information: Despite a raging war in Syria, the family of the applicant was unblemished by the chaos. The strategic government assets near the applicant’s house would have made the region an easy target, but it was not. The calmness of her journey is shattered in one event. From the privileges of a cocooned life, the applicant is forced to think about survival, her sister’s future, and her future in the US. The second half of the narrative captures the change that was forced on her. 
    Theme: Gratitude, Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I consciously chose not to start the essay with a dialogue or trauma. Two lines are allocated to set up the narrative before the trauma event.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – War, Immigration and Starting Over Again (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay: Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve. (up to 300 words)

    Example #16: Creative or Finance
    Background Information: The applicant starts the narrative with the origin of her talents. The unbridled enthusiasm receives a reality check when in high school, the applicant’s father has a conversation with her about academics. While the applicant picked up her quant skills, she was reaching over 50,000 loyal fans, and her videos captured 1 million views. 
    Theme: Passion, Talent
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing vulnerability is the toughest part for Harvard MBA applicants. For this essay example, I have captured the applicant’s uncertainty about career choice throughout the essay. Here the goal is to show vulnerability in the career choice essay while for leadership and growth essay, I could capture one example each from creative and PE industry respectively to balance the narrative. So don’t follow this example without a strategy.  
    Read: Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay – Creative or Finance (Business-Minded HBS MBA Essay Example)

  • Stanford MBA Essay Guide (24 Sample Essays)
  • Columbia MBA Essay Guide (21 Sample Essays)
  • Wharton MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • INSEAD MBA Essay Guide (19 Sample Essays)
  • Darden MBA Essay Guide  (21 Sample Essays) 
  • Yale SOM MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • Tuck MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • Haas MBA Essay Guide (18 Sample Essays)
  • NYU Stern MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays + 6 Examples - Visual Essay)
  • LBS MBA Essay Guide (6 Sample Essays)
  • MIT Sloan MBA Essay Guide (6 Sample Cover Letters + 3 Sample Video Statement Scripts + 3 Sample Optional Essays)
  • Kellogg MBA Essay Guide (11 Sample Essays)
  • Chicago Booth MBA Essay Guide (12 Sample Essays)
  • Ross MBA Essay Guide (31 Sample Essays)
  • Duke Fuqua MBA Essay Guide (10 Sample Essays + Two 25 Random Things Samples)
  • Cambridge MBA Essay Guide (12 Sample Essays)

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