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Harvard HBS MBA Essays - Highlight 10 Traits

As the program with the highest application volume, Harvard must differentiate between two applicants with similar scores (GMAT/GRE and GPA). 

In your application (essay, resume, and recommendation letter), make sure that these 10 traits are highlighted.

  1. Experience

   2.  Preparedness

   3.  Learning

   4.  Extroversion

   5.  Succinct Communication

   6.  Ownership

   7.   Data-driven decision making

   8.  Passion

   9.  Sense of Community

  10.  Chutzpah

1.  Experience

In the HBS Case study method, professors give scenarios and roles for students to play. You might have to decide as a CEO, a Manager, an Employee, or think like a Customer. Your decision will determine the future of your company or the competitive dynamics in the market.

Most first-time writers struggle to bring an authentic narrative to their stories, primarily because we are not as imaginative as we think. Professional writers spend just 4-hours everyday writing. The rest of the day is spent doing real work and interacting with people. 

Stories lie hidden in the daily struggles of life. 

Except for talented writers that we can count on our fingers, most have one good book in them. They are the fictitious version of their life or a life they are familiar with. Rest are derivatives of their initial story.

When the admissions team looks at your story, they are evaluating whether you can contribute to the case study method and the larger engagements in the class.  

Do you have exposure as a Manager?

Can you break down the value that the company is offering as a customer? 

Do you understand the incentives of the team – as a project member, team lead, manager, or employee?

Have you worked closely with a CXO or understand the multiple pressures they endure to offer value to shareholders, customers, and employees?

We can imagine the pressure and put ourselves in ‘their’ shoes. However, without relevant experience to evaluate a scenario, the narratives are like empty promises. They are just words.

2.  Preparedness

Before the case study method, students must brush up on case facts – competitors, pricing, limitations, opportunities in the market, and threats from new entrants. The day before the case, smaller groups (5-6) from the learning team (a group of 90 students) come together, read the overview of the case, and engage in an open dialogue, discussing the scenario from different perspectives.

The Scale of Preparedness

While working with clients, I have seen varying degrees of preparedness and the impact it had on the application. Those who looked at the process with open-mindedness prepared extensively when each to-do list was presented. Interestingly, this small group came up with the most creative prose and helped us build a strong narrative.

The other end of the spectrum is when the client is ready with a summary of five life-altering events – success, failure, learning, growth, and goals. They have assimilated the techniques, the tools, and the discipline required to create a wholesome application. Needless to say, they fare extremely well too. 

It is the middle that the admission is trying to eliminate. 

When the Harvard MBA application is considered a ‘dream’ application without any effort put into understanding the culture, the students, the writing process, and the iteration required to represent one’s authentic self, the process becomes mechanical with no ‘spark’ captured in the essay. 

Preparedness is a virtue that differentiates a professional from the amateur, the contender from the dreamer.

Those who are stuck in the twilight zone assume that with some strange stroke of luck, they will get an interview invite from Harvard. That rarely happens. The ones that happen become folklore and spread widely to give the impression that it is all about luck. 

‘Preparedness’ is an integral part of the HBS culture. 

Even for professors who have read the case a hundred times, the case study discussions are sacred. They put a lot of thought into the opening remark and techniques to orchestrate the talking points in such a way that the wider – traditional and unique ideas are captured, entertained, and developed. 

The discussions can move in multiple directions.

That is the fun part for the professors – getting perspectives that they have never thought of while preparing for the case. 
What will be the opening question, and who should be the first person to kick start the debate are some of the concerns that professors have. 

3.  Learning

What these discussions do is that each student will get the chance to vocalize their opinion in front of the learning team and get additional or contradicting information that validates or changes the stand completely. Before the case study method, students must brush up on case facts – competitors, pricing, limitations, opportunities in the market, and threats from new entrants. 

The day before the case, smaller groups (5-6) from the learning team (a group of 90) come together, read the overview of the case, and engage in an open dialogue, depending on how each student takes the information. The group rationalizes them in a concrete direction that synthesizes the collective knowledge. 

Even before the case study method, a debate has already started. 

With the details, students rationalize their decision-making capability. After the case has been looked at from different angles, students form a firm opinion. They are ready to communicate the rationale in front of the class. 

Learning is listening, rationalizing, and pivoting. 

If you don’t have listening skills, the discussions become a shadow game of keeping mute and putting forward a contrarian view just to gain brownie points or demonstrate your superior thinking. 

Good listeners evaluate the tone, the motivation, the content, and the goal of the discussions, without getting carried away by personalities and hundreds of interesting talking points outside the scope of the topic. 

4.  Extroversion

Even those who label themselves as an introvert are ambivert in real-life – outgoing and social when the topic of discussion interests them, and quiet when the topic is out of their expertise. Interestingly, the admissions team prefers extroverts over ambiverts. 

A large part of the class discussions would involve topics that are out of your comfort zone. Even if you prepare with rigor, speaking in front of a diverse and accomplished class requires the thick skin to look foolish. 

Extroverts are naturally good at shielding themselves from embarrassment. The essay, resume, and recommendation letters become valuable data points to measure your thick skin and extroversion. 

The extra-curricular that align with your personality – debating, leading cross-cultural teams, public performance (arts, culture, and sports), and contributing to sales (professionally or at a non-profit) are good examples of extroversion. 

50% of the final grade depends on your class participation. The ideal participation in a 90-member class is one where you comment on every two classes. Before you join the program, professors will study your name, achievements, and socio-economic background and even evaluate your potential. 

To avoid the biases of the professors from influencing the evaluation of each student, the school even manages to employ a stenographer who notes down everything you say. 

In such an environment, your extraversion and public speaking skills have extra credence. 

5.  Succinct Communication

When you debate about the case a day before the session, you get the chance to listen to your peers who have worked in the industry or to someone who has faced a similar problem. 

By actively listening and succinctly discussing without going out of scope, you develop the habit of debating on points without your emotions clouding the objective of the discussion. 

Many Harvard MBA students have rated peer learning as more valuable than learning from professors. It can only happen when you listen and communicate without going over the same point again and again. 

Even in class, when the professors ask you to state your opinion, they expect you to make the point in just 30 seconds – a skill that marks a unique leadership trait.

6.  Ownership

Even if you have not led large teams or had a life-altering impact on your community, team, or company, one trait that resonates with the admission team is absolute ownership of the tasks you are entrusted with. 

As you progress in your career and the responsibilities increase, owning tasks and the outcome of competing priorities require the skill to manage time, prioritize tasks, and understand the impact of each task on the stakeholders. 

The perspective on the bigger picture comes from immersing oneself in the project. 

While discussing the best strategy to offer value for a marketing campaign, I suggested to my friend that instead of outsourcing whitepapers to a digital agency, he bring his unique voice to the paper. 

I believed that his talent to communicate succinctly would connect with CXOs. He interrupted me with, “this is not my company.” 

I had become accustomed to thinking diligently about adding value like an entrepreneur, and I forgot that he was an employee. Suddenly, I could recognize the boundaries of ownership. 

Ownership of a project is not mutually exclusive to individual motivation and the influence of the person. HBS understands this. However, I have seen applicants continue to support causes despite the limited impact of such causes on their admissions. 

Later, while brainstorming, they would passionately share about the small improvements in the infrastructure, the families their time and technology have impacted, and the change in perspective their involvement has brought in education, healthcare, and the adoption of green technology. It became much easier for us to create a narrative around the small project over several branded non-profit engagements. 

The applicant truly owned the project.

7.    Data-driven decision making

Unlike the case study method, where the limitations, opportunities, and threats are clearly defined, in real-life, decisions are made on insufficient data. 

Take any crisis. You must act fast and decisively to weather the upheaval the setback has caused.

Imagine making such decisions every day in Technology, Operations, Finance, Marketing, Talent Management, and Strategy. 

That is the life of a CXO. 

Your every move is scrutinized, criticized, and questioned until the market validates or punishes your choices.

Data-driven decision-making is up against personal incentives, politics, and ideological warfare. Withstanding the pressures of the stakeholders and developing a superior filter for narratives & spin is a complementary skill to data-driven decision making.
A big reason why schools insist on evaluating your statistics score is that the dashboards, AI tools, and quant analysis are founded on statistics and probability. 

Your in-depth understanding of this critical decision-making tool, the assumptions on which the models operate, the margins of safety to take risks, and the ‘blind spots’ of statistical analysis are equally important when making high-stake decisions.

The nuances of such decisions might not be entirely captured in one essay. However, your skills in making choices with limited information and getting it right based on rigorous quant skills would be a relief for the admission team, who wants to ensure that your success is not just driven by gut feeling but strong science. 

8.  Passion

Passion is the most loosely used word in modern culture without understanding the intensity of this bastardized term. 
I am passionate about Basketball but not passionate enough to practice like Jordan - 3 hours every day. 

My friend is passionate about writing but is not willing to write 2000 draft pages and, eventually, 1000 published pages every year, as I do. 

I became passionate about viruses with the pandemic but will never read 20 dry scientific papers every week as my brother does as a Pulmonologist. 

Passion is love. 

You love what you do. You do what you love. 

In an MBA application, it is easy to spot passion. It need not be related to your post-MBA goal or even your career.

The tale of passion for Math, Science, or Technology is plenty and genuine when it comes from an authentic applicant. 

The interesting ones are from your school and undergraduate years when the motivation for an MBA might not be fully formed.

The passion was not strategic. It came from your love for what you did and the impact you had. 

9.   Sense of Community

The common bucket where the passion materializes for MBA applicants is in local communities. 

Even the most driven, individualistic society becomes sensitive to the local community during a war, disease, or natural calamity. 

HBS is looking for a habit of engaging in local communities regardless of your country or city/town of origin. Applicants take the tutoring, pro-bono consulting, and technology integration route to highlight skills that are not easily captured in their professional careers. 

Some of the relevant volunteering and community service we have seen in the HBS MBA Application include:

•    A quant-strong Finance professional demonstrating his caring side through mentoring immigrants on career choices and learning techniques
•    A marketing professional demonstrating her learning skills by demonstrating capabilities in technology integration that served low-income families in a developing economy
•    A Technologist demonstrating her creative side through paintings and auctioning them to build funds for hunger management in Africa.
•    An Oil & Gas professional showcasing the origin of her passion for renewable energy and the incredible awareness she built around adopting green technology
•    A Business Development professional with a passion for governance and the progress he made in transforming a cluster of villages in India with equitable access to information, healthcare, and electricity

If your target post-MBA industry or function is different from your current experience, community service becomes an excellent opportunity to demonstrate your skills and attitude toward serving local communities. 

Known Brand vs. Start-up (Non-Profit)

We have seen just-in-time engagements with start-ups and systematic volunteering for known non-profits (Teach for America, Habitat for Humanity, and Red Cross). Depending on the narrative, both have worked. However, for known brands, the scrutiny is low, and the believability is high. 

The start-up engagements require some impressive numbers. If you don’t have great numbers to quote, but the engagement gave an insight into human behavior or your life goals, breaking down the narrative with impact at a personal level works the most. 

10.   Chutzpah

The one person who epitomizes Chutzpah is Elon Musk. His Twitter eccentricities aside, the vision to have a backup plan and not be sitting ducks for an extinction event on earth led to SpaceX. The building blocks to colonize Mars have led to rapid developments in space exploration, satellite technology, and the development of reusable rockets. 

When leading car manufacturers considered Electric Vehicles (EVs) as a gimmick to keep shareholders happy, Elon started Tesla with the vision to “accelerate the advent of electric vehicles.” 

Mission-driven companies always gain mass support over suits with short-term thinking. 

HBS MBA admissions team is not expecting ‘Entrepreneur-like’ long-term thinking. However, narratives where the ‘greater’ good of the community is emphasized over personal goals will attract empathy for your tales of ‘Chutzpah.’ 

Working on goals that are outside your comfort zone is a rare quality. The challenge is in building a narrative that identifies your weakness, shares your fears, and then gives a peek into how you take risks. 

Nothing would seem logical. However, your ‘confidence’ in learning and figuring out, and the impact your initiative would have on society, ties the story together. 

The admissions team subconsciously will root for you when the scale of the challenges is clearly defined, and your sincere effort is highlighted.

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  • Harvard MBA Essay Guide (20 Sample Essays)

    Growth-Oriented Essay: Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth. (up to 250 words) 

    Example #1: Persistence Narrative 
    Background Information: The applicant – a design and music talent, shares her journey through several setbacks. She attributes curiosity to her growth.  
    Curiosity: Philosophy  
    Curiosity (Explained): Curiosity as a philosophy is tough to translate into a narrative unless you are from the creative industry or your contributions had an influence on a solution or an initiative.  
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to capture the humanity of the applicant and her influence in music instead of just highlighting how she overcame multiple roadblocks to gain attention as a designer.  
    Theme: Persistence  
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Life Starts at NO (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example) 

    Example #2: International Community Building 
    Background Information: The applicant, a Machine Learning (ML) entrepreneur specializing in healthcare diagnostics, shares how his curiosity to learn other ML algorithms’ evolution in diagnosing Alzheimer’s, cancer, and heart disease transformed his platform into a global community. 
    MBA Essay Strategy: I wanted to show the applicant’s contributions in diagnostic from 2020 to 2024 by citing two events. Such examples build credibility instead of engagements that were recent. The evolution of the platform from an AI development community to a community for discussing the application of AI in diagnostics is captured through a ‘curiosity’ angle.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Growth through Collaboration (AI in Healthcare) (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #3: Culture
    Background Information: The applicant, an Entrepreneur from India narrates his first entrepreneurial experience – facilitating exchange of stamps in the late 1990s.
    Theme: Culture
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Instead of addressing the biases in the investor community that could turn preachy, I wanted to focus on the applicant and his entrepreneurial journey by citing two entrepreneurial experiences – a platform(club) for stamp collection and his Grocery delivery App.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – The American Dream (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #4: Addiction
    Background Information: The applicant – a beneficiary of the foster home system, captures the sacrifice his adopted grandparents made to save him from a path of addiction. Paying it back through early intervention among teenagers and community engagement is the curiosity narrative.
    Theme: Addiction
    MBA Essay Strategy:  My strategy is to capture a gratitude narrative in the first one-third of the essay to demonstrate motivation for starting the venture and dedicate the latter part of the essay to the unique solution
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Drug Addiction and Gaming (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #5: Scarcity
    Background Information: The applicant, an education major, recognizes that 70% of all students in Kenya don’t have a computer. The curiosity that drives him to pivot from one solution to another is the growth narrative.
    Theme: Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Often, innovation is captured with a ‘hero’ narrative where the applicant is the sole originator of an idea. I wanted to break that cliché and include a person from whom the applicant learned to use a concept called ‘scaffolding.’
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Scarcity (Growth-Oriented HBS Essay Example)

    Example #6: FinTech
    Background Information: The applicant captures a vulnerable moment of a beneficiary to compare his journey of side hustle before a technology giant noticed his talent. Although cryptocurrency is not a flavor for the year, capture niches where innovation is still happening. 
    Theme: Education, Child Welfare
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Empathizing with a techno solution is tough without a strong backstory around the beneficiary. For the essay, I wanted to clearly establish the beneficiary – Rami, before the applicant narrates the similarities to his journey and finally shares the solution that emerged from his curiosity.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – FinTech as a Tool for Good (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #7: Learning from the best
    Background Information: The applicant – a Remote Engineer in the Oil and Gas industry, reflects on a value that has helped her learn from the best regardless of her geographical limitations.
    Theme: Learning
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The effectiveness of the case-study method depends on the assumption that peers in a Harvard MBA class will help elevate your learning experience. For the essay, I have highlighted the applicant’s recognition of this value proposition with three examples.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Learning from the Best (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #8: Military & Search for IMPACT
    Background Information: The most common narrative for US military applicants is to quote 9/11 and the reaction your immediate family had while watching the events unfold. The horrifying moment is captured as a motivation to join the Military. On digging deeper, most applicants would share that their motivations were diverse.
    Theme: Career Choice
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I wanted to quickly highlight that the applicant had the choice of entering any industry. One achievement to demonstrate his curiosity that I shared in the first half is the invention of a game. Since the game is mentioned in the resume and verifiable through search, I didn’t quote the name. By clearly highlighting the person’s curiosity and career options, the family legacy is used as a factor in joining the military.
    Read: Harvard MBA Curiosity Essay – Career Choice after a Military Career (Growth-Oriented HBS MBA Essay Example)
     
    Leadership-Focused Essay: What experiences have shaped who you are, how you invest in others, and what kind of leader you want to become? (up to 250 words)

    Example #9: Small Business Values
    Background Information: The applicant - a second-generation Asian American, is familiar with the values of fiscal conservatism, building relationships, and understanding the daily struggles of the community through his family’s department store.
    Theme: Customer-Centric
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The applicant’s role in developing an App for the store is highlighted in the essay at a crucial part of the narrative so that the essay is not all about his father. I have also humanized the journey – by sharing how upset the father was when the revenues fell by 40%. The essay is about the transformation in the applicant’s value from a person chasing productivity and optimization technique to someone who is truly thinking about the customers. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Small Business Values (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #10: Breaking Away from Family Business
    Background Information: A unique challenge that applicants whose parents are public figures or CXOs of businesses or entrepreneurs are the pressure to live up to the parent’s standards or milestones. For the leadership narrative, the burden of legacy is established before the narrative addresses his leadership principles.
    Theme: Authenticity  
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, I want to capture an entrepreneur’s journey to rise above his entrepreneur father’s image. But I didn’t want to make the entire essay about this complex dynamics. The narrative is around the applicant’s focus on customers and surrounding with teams who keeps him grounded. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Breaking Away from Family Business(Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #11: Creativity and Communication 
    Background Information: When the overall percentage of users with internet access is 62% in South Africa and the inequality accentuated by the rural and urban divide, the applicant endured the lack of digital infrastructure, and spending close to 22% of the family income on gaining relevant information on schools, global exams, and financial assistance. 
    Theme: Creativity, Communication
    MBA Essay Strategy:  The strategy is to share why the applicant values no distraction in a child’s home for optimum education experience. Then I highlight the many roadblocks the applicant’s non-profit faced in receiving fee waiver for their cooperative run ISP.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Non-Profit (Telecom) (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #12: Mental Health
    Background Information: The applicant like most didn’t pay much attention to the mental health epidemic until tragedy hit home.
    Theme: Communication, Innovation
    MBA Essay Strategy:  A question we frequently get from applicants is whether they should cite tragedy in the family as a motivation for a venture or a non-profit initiative. As long as you don’t linger too much on the tragedy and offer a balanced narrative, there are no restrictions on leveraging unique stories from your life. 
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Mental Health (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #13: Trauma, Healing & Finding Authentic Self
    Background Information: The applicant narrates the absurdity of war in the narrative about the duties in Kabul, and the trauma. Instead of wallowing in on the horror, the applicant takes what makes military applicants strong and guides unprivileged children build life and leadership skills.
    Theme: Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing PTSD in an essay, the healing process, and the cues that helped the applicant are too sacred to be shared in a Harvard MBA application essay. However, with the right motivation and narrative arcs, you can capture the essence of your journey without sharing the darkest secrets. That is what I did by merging two stories – the horrors of the war with a non-profit engagement.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Military & PTSD (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #14: Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra
    Background Information: In this narrative, the applicant captures Peru’s Silver mining boom of 2006. The growth experienced in her father’s business shifted the family’s economic status to a new stratosphere. Through the changing economic and family dynamics, the applicant finds her voice in a unique way, initially to record her unheard voice but later as one of the youngest subject matter experts in mining and commodities.  
    Theme: Failure
    MBA Essay Strategy:  For the essay, the strategy is to show how life’s unpredictability is a blessing. By narrating two setback events, the essay demonstrates the applicant’s resilience and her acknowledgment of people who made a comeback possible.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – Addiction, Setback and Leadership Mantra (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Example #15: War, Immigration and Starting Over Again
    Background Information: Despite a raging war in Syria, the family of the applicant was unblemished by the chaos. The strategic government assets near the applicant’s house would have made the region an easy target, but it was not. The calmness of her journey is shattered in one event. From the privileges of a cocooned life, the applicant is forced to think about survival, her sister’s future, and her future in the US. The second half of the narrative captures the change that was forced on her. 
    Theme: Gratitude, Resilience
    MBA Essay Strategy:  I consciously chose not to start the essay with a dialogue or trauma. Two lines are allocated to set up the narrative before the trauma event.
    Read: Harvard MBA Leadership Essay – War, Immigration and Starting Over Again (Leadership-Focused HBS MBA Essay Example)

    Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay: Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve. (up to 300 words)

    Example #16: Creative or Finance
    Background Information: The applicant starts the narrative with the origin of her talents. The unbridled enthusiasm receives a reality check when in high school, the applicant’s father has a conversation with her about academics. While the applicant picked up her quant skills, she was reaching over 50,000 loyal fans, and her videos captured 1 million views. 
    Theme: Passion, Talent
    MBA Essay Strategy:  Capturing vulnerability is the toughest part for Harvard MBA applicants. For this essay example, I have captured the applicant’s uncertainty about career choice throughout the essay. Here the goal is to show vulnerability in the career choice essay while for leadership and growth essay, I could capture one example each from creative and PE industry respectively to balance the narrative. So don’t follow this example without a strategy.  
    Read: Harvard MBA Business-Minded Essay – Creative or Finance (Business-Minded HBS MBA Essay Example)

  • Stanford MBA Essay Guide (24 Sample Essays)
  • Columbia MBA Essay Guide (21 Sample Essays)
  • Wharton MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • INSEAD MBA Essay Guide (19 Sample Essays)
  • Darden MBA Essay Guide  (21 Sample Essays) 
  • Yale SOM MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • Tuck MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays)
  • Haas MBA Essay Guide (18 Sample Essays)
  • NYU Stern MBA Essay Guide (15 Sample Essays + 6 Examples - Visual Essay)
  • LBS MBA Essay Guide (6 Sample Essays)
  • MIT Sloan MBA Essay Guide (6 Sample Cover Letters + 3 Sample Video Statement Scripts + 3 Sample Optional Essays)
  • Kellogg MBA Essay Guide (11 Sample Essays)
  • Chicago Booth MBA Essay Guide (12 Sample Essays)
  • Ross MBA Essay Guide (31 Sample Essays)
  • Duke Fuqua MBA Essay Guide (10 Sample Essays + Two 25 Random Things Samples)
  • Cambridge MBA Essay Guide (12 Sample Essays)

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