MIT Sloan MBA Essay Analysis & Example (Manufacturing to Consulting)

In the fifth example, we consider the fictitious profile of a women applicant, working as a Component Engineer for a mobile phone manufacturer in China, who despite contributing towards bringing down the cost of cutting-edge mobile phone technology by 35%, feels her true potential would be met by transitioning as a supply chain manager or working as a consultant in the retail industry.

Sample MIT Sloan MBA Cover Letter – Manufacturing to Consulting (Retail) (299 Words)

August 01, 2019
Ms. Ying Jiang
Beijing, China

Dear Mr. Rod Garcia,

The rapid evolution in customer’s preferences from the front-facing camera to the unquenchable need for speed puts pressure on Phone manufacturers to compete in a global supply chain where the cutting-edge technology becomes obsolete every six months. As the component Engineer, I developed a dashboard that gave a live update on the life cycle of the phone components and made quick judgments on the impact replacements of the obsolete components would have on the price and the regulatory scrutiny the choice would invite.  The balancing of the technical, market, regulatory, and supply chain feasibility without impacting last-mile delivery although stressful took me to ...

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