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Include Spirituality Not Religion in MBA Application Essays

Religion in MBA Application EssaysAdmission Committee (AdCom) might squirm if you sound like a religious fundamentalist not because they do not respect your belief in a higher power, but MBA Application Essays are the last place that you expect a serious applicant, promoting his faith. Some applicants have argued that their core values have been influenced by their religion. Fair Enough but with word limit, essays offer little space for explanation. If the AdCom does not follow your religion, it becomes even harder to understand the context. Remember – in MBA Application essays, it is all about context.

A safe bet is to include spirituality in your essay. We are not talking about losing worldly desires to find the truth but an attitude of “honest curiosity”. A case that encourages applicants to adopt this attitude is the guidelines offered by MBA Admissions team in top Business Schools. The common phrase “Be Reflective” is repeated across schools. Exaggeration spells out arrogance, and according to a former HBS Admissions member, it is one quality that will jeopardize admission chances of an applicant no matter how qualified he is.

Here are some questions that will help you write essays with “honest curiosity”.

1) What is non-negotiable for you?

It can be values, habits and preferences that have held you steadfast during crisis and brought your focus back on the job in hand. Early to Rise and starting with Gym are habits that have helped applicants negotiate stressful days. You develop some values while working. Being on Time and non-negotiability on integrity are two qualities that will find appreciation with the admission team.

2) What is your biggest failure?

No matter how much you hide or override the sense of loss with positive feeling, and subsequent successes, previous failures will remind you about the miscalculation, and faulty assumptions. Successful applicants have a way of explaining the failures without sounding defensive or careless. Download our Essay Guide to know how.

3) What was your transformative experience?


We all have one transformative experience. It can be a loss of a dear one, a job from which you were fired,  favoritism that gave unwarranted advantage to your colleague or failures that shook the core of your being, and taught you a valuable life lesson. AdCom is looking for that narrative. They know that the experience has changed and motivated you to pursue an MBA.

4) Show evidence of your charity


Charity begins at home, and AdCom does not evaluate your monetary contribution. That is easy. Show evidence that you were willing to share your time with the less privileged or work for a cause that uplifts the lowest strata of the society. Without empathy and a sense of community, you will be just another number crunching manager. Business Schools are no longer willing to accept exceptional academic applicant. They are looking for balance in personality – competitive and empathic.


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Only 1 in 900 gains admission to Harvard MBA program. If you write your essay focused only on your achievements, post-MBA goals, and your pre-MBA experience, you will be among the 899 rejected applicants.

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Winning MBA Essay Guide Includes
+Harvard MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    Sample MBA Essay – Gratitude & Giving Back   
    Sample MBA Essay – Entrepreneurship (Influence of Childhood)   

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Stanford
MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    Sample Essay A
+ Chicago Booth MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    #1. Modern Art = Make you Think   
    #2. Teamwork and Individual Ambition   
    #3. Adventure   
    #4. Diversity = Creativity   
    #5. Classroom Experience   
    #6. Harper Center   

+ Columbia MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
     Sample MBA Essay – Most Passionate About   
     Sample MBA Essay – Free Day   

+ MIT Sloan MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
     Sample Cover Letter
+ Kellogg MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
     Sample Essay - Leadership and Challenges   
     Sample Essay - How you have grown and intend to grow   

+ Insead MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
   Sample Essay 1: Candid Description, Strengths & Weaknesses
    Sample Essay 2: Achievements and Failures
    Sample Essay 3: Extra-Curricular and How enriched you are

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Haas
MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
     Sample MBA Essay: Non-Profit   
     Sample MBA Essay: Technology   
     Sample MBA Essay: Marketing   
     Sample MBA Essay: Getting Fired   
     Sample MBA Essay: Diverse and Inclusive Culture   
     Sample MBA Essay: Leadership   
     Sample MBA Essay: Post-MBA Goal & How Pre-MBA Experience will help  
 
+ Yale SOM MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
     Sample MBA Essay – Investment Banker
     Sample MBA Essay - Consultant  
     Sample MBA Essay - Technologist  
     Sample MBA Essay - Marketer  
     Sample MBA Essay - Entrepreneur  
 
+ Ross MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    Sample MBA Essay: Finance Professional who was a former member of a rock band   
    Sample MBA Essay: Technologist (Idea to Action)   
    Sample MBA Essay: Creative Marketing (Idea to Action)   
    Sample MBA Essay: Consulting (Made a Difference)   
    Sample MBA Essay: Losing a Client (Resilience)   
    Sample MBA Essay: Finance to Marketing (extra-curricular)   
    Sample MBA Essay: I am Aware that I am different   
    Sample MBA Essay: I find it Challenging when People   
    Sample MBA Essay: A valuable thing I have taught someone   
    Sample Essay – Part 2 (Short-term & Long-Term Goals, skills relevant to your career goals and how Ross  
    prepares you for the goals)   
+ Wharton MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    8 Professional Gains

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London Business School
MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    London as the Financial Hub   
    London as the Technology Hub   
    London as the Consulting Hub   
    How to Cite the Curriculum (Example)   
    Sample LBS MBA Essay: Post-MBA Goals - How Prior Experience & LBS MBA will contribute (486   
    Words)
   
+ Darden MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    Case Study Method   
    What is valued at Darden?
    Framework for Answering the Darden Essay Question   
    Sample Darden Essay: When your opinion evolved through discussions (499 Words)

+ Duke Fuqua MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
    Framework for Answering the Duke Fuqua Short-Answer Essay Questions   
    Sample Short-term Goals Essay – Technology to Consulting (100 Words)   
    Sample Long-term Goals Essay – Consulting for Government (100 Words)   
    Sample Long-term Goals Essay – Plan B (89 Words)   
    Framework for Answering the Duke Fuqua 25 Random Things   
    Sample Duke Fuqua Essay: The Fuqua community and you (Max 2 Pages)  
+ NYU Stern MBA Essay Tips (2018 Entering Class)
     Sample NYU Stern Essay 1: Goals (498 Words)    
     Essay 3:  Personal Expression (a.k.a. "Pick Six")    
          5 Examples with Images

+ Sample Essays
+ The Art of Storytelling 
+ Leadership Narratives
+ Review Tips
+ Persuasion Strategies
+ The Secret to "unleashing" your unique voice
+ How to write about your Strengths
+ How to write about your Weaknesses

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